Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Beautiful, thoughtful poem in honor of dear Brooke.
I love how you incorporated parts of her poems to
create these lovely thoughts.
I'm sure she will love this one. Thanks for sharing.
Nancy

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much .

Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem that is dedicated to Brook and her speedy recovery. Your poem flows and rhymes well and your artwork choice goes well with your words. Good alliteration of words throughout your poem.

Angel123

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much.

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi Sanku,

Good poem, I'm sure Brooke will appreciate it when she is able to read all the tributes. Nicely done, you touch on all her favourite subjects.

Patrick

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Sanku, tributes don't come much better than this my friend, your touching and heartfelt words will hopefully be read by Brooke sometime in the future, we all pray for her.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank yo very much,I too hope that all these poems would be read by her.

reply by Eric1 on 05-Jun-2015

You are welcome Sanku.

Comment from Dr. Nad

Excellent

What a kind tribute to an extremely talented friend going through a tough physical challenge. You've done something that's very difficult to do, and done it very well. You've taken Brooke's words and creative thought and masterfully woven them into a new creation of rhyme for good reason. God bless you embrace the love from above!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much.

reply by Dr. Nad on 07-Jun-2015

You are Welcome, Embrace the Love from Above!

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

Brooke certainly has a way with words and her imagination never lacked inspiration. This is a lovely poem in her honor
Sanku. Well Done.:<) Nancy

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much,Nancy.

Comment from GregoryCody

Excellent

I love this. What a beautiful tribute! Your flow is perfect and your word choices are great. I love your notes too.


Between birds and beetle I think you are missing a space.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much. Yes i will correct it.

Comment from flamingstar

Excellent

A lot of beautiful imagery here and some lines that sound great to the ear. Love the paper boats on puddles, basking daffodils and April roses...

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much.

Comment from emkoutny

Excellent

I am new here so I haven't had a chance to read Brooke's work. I think it is beautiful the way the virtual community has rallied around her. Your poem is lovely and I enjoyed the rhymes. (dew/hue) (shawls/sprawls) What a lovely tribute to emply her images in your work.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much for these lovely words.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Another fine tribute to Brooke here.

Fantastic imagery that the woman herself would be proud of I feel.

Very nicely penned.

GMG

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Thank you very much.