Comment from petalangela

Excellent

A lovely poem of fantasy myths and magic. Without these childhood's reality would be too hard too bear.
To this day as adults we seek fairy dust some still find it. They are the lucky ones. Love the artbwork

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Thank you for the great review and insightful remarks. Yes, the lucky ones still find the fiary dust. I hope you are one of them. Debi

Comment from inside echo

Excellent

Such a gentle and easily read poem. It rhymes wonderfully. Proudly, it brings back memories of the tales that do really bring magic to children. Adults also. It made me smile. Your poem flows perfectly. Very well done. thank you for sharing.
echo

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Hi Echo,
Thank you for the delightful review. Yes, children and adults alike love magic in their lives. I appreciat the lovely comments about the writing and appreciate the encouragement. Debi

reply by inside echo on 25-May-2015

You are most welcome.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

And how children thrive on reading those tales of dragons and witches and fairies. A fantasy world that allows their imagination free rein. My son and now my grandson are hooked on this magic.

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Hi Shari,
I love reading them too. Having a niece or nephew over is just an excuse to pull out the fairy tales. Of course, Lord of the Rings is loaded with all that fairy stuff and it isn't isn't for the youngsters. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

The imagination can definitely lead one into a fantasy land. Lovely imagery of fairies and magic and excellent rhyming. Great picture to complement. Faye

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Hi Faye,
Thank you so much for sharing in the fantasy. Imagination is a wonderful thing. Thank you for the comment about the rhyming. Debi.

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

I could use a little of the magic fairy dust:) Well written in a great form. Great rhyming couplets and repeating line.

~~Teresa~~

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Hi Teresa,
Thank you for the great comments about the writing. I appreciate the encouragement. Here's wishing you a whole packet of fairy dust on its way to you.
Debi

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi, How nicely you turn ,threat and twist your imagination here. A lovely writing combining fairy, mythology and bringing them into a modern mind. The repetition of the last sentence of each stanza gives the writing great support. I hope you find this golden land. There was s so much subtlety here. It is truly said to stay alive we make our own fairy tale and embellish it with sweet invigorating strength, sunshine sentiments that continue to sustain us through the uncertainties of life.
God bless
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

Thank you for the wonderful review, Benny Beeharry. It is always good to hear from you. I appreciate the fine comments about the writing and the lovely wishes about finding the golden land. Blessings to you, sir. Debi

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

Now how could one not love a poem about fairy tales and pixie dust..I sure do..Great rhythm and rhyme al the way through..Wish I had another 6 for you..See you even made me make a rhyme heheheh
tk

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 23-May-2015

LOL. I love your review. Thank you so much for the virtual six stars and the encouraging comments. You are a wonderful poet so I'm sure the rhyming came easily for you. Thank your for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate it. Debi

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Exceptional

This is a delightful Kyrielle WJ. It just moves along like a lovely melody.. Should be put to music. A fantasy set to music. Cool! LOL The Art and the presentation, an added plus to your work and I am awarding it a six. Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thank you for the lovely six stars, and even more for the kind comments, Nancy. Setting it to music sounds delightful, but I don't know anyone who writes music . Thank you for an encouraging review. You have me smiling. Debi

Comment from Writingfundimension

Exceptional

'The golden tales of long ago
may be pretend, and yet I know
they breathe beneath their cloaks of rust.
Deep magic dwells in fairy dust.'

Superb rhyme and meter throughout this poem, Debi. I love the repeating line of 'deep magic dwells in fairy dust'. Glad I have a six left to give this splendid poem!

:) Bev

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 24-May-2015

Thank you for the wonderful six star review, Bev! I appreciate the encouraging comments even more. Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'll be stopping by your page soon to see what those those hunters are up to.

reply by Writingfundimension on 24-May-2015

You're very welcome, Debi. I think you're a fine poet! :) Bev

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem about fairy dust :) Great use of the kyrielle form. Excellent repeating line that blends well each time and carries the story throughout. Good rhymes and I especially enjoyed august.

 Comment Written 21-May-2015

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reply by the author on 25-May-2015

Hi Joy,
It is so good to hear from you again. I think this is the first kyrielle I've written since we took class together. I am so pleased you enjoyed it. Thank you for the encouraging remarks about the writing. Thank you for mentioning the word "august". I wondered if it might be over the top since it isn't used too often, but it did seem to fit. I appreciate you stopping by to read and review.
Debi