Comment from valerieellis

Excellent

Excellent! I know this feeling all too well! The rhyme and rhythm in this poem flowed smoothly and you painted a vivid picture with your words. This poem evoked strong emotions...but I haven't gotten to the place of celebrating yet. Thank you for sharing. God bless :-)

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Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This poem is very relate-able. I think everyone has lost a loved one at some point in their lives. Everyone has also had their hearts broken. Good luck in the contest, and thank you for sharing.

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Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I sense Country and westeren lying behind this lyric of the jilted lover making the best of things assisted by a bottle of course. Shades of a Johnny Cash number - "Put the bottle on the table" Good luck in the contest.

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Comment from kriver

Excellent

Hi,
The words seem pretty smooth
But I think I would change the word (another) to maybe (the).
Other than that it seems
to be pretty good.
Good story line that
is clearly described.
The rhyming parts of
the sentences
seem to interact well.
The rhythm and cadence
appears to be good.
Over all it is a good write.
It is a good piece.
But it is depressing.
However I guess it is
suppose to be that way.

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Sometimes to 'celebrate' a relationship ending, is the best way to go forward with your life. Have a party, have a few drinks, then have some fun. I am sure many have done it and survived the experience! Well written and a pleasure to read. Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra

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Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hello Poet. I'm not sure this one is so much of a celebration as a wake ... lol ... Many a man and woman have drowned their sorrow however, which makes for a delightful poem. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

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