Comment from Sasha

Excellent

The only word that come to mine (repeatedly) is yucky, yucky, and yucky. You give a whole new meaning to insanity in this one. And now she is out and about doing her dastardly deeds again, I am sure. Very good work with this one.

 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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reply by the author on 09-May-2015

Thanks, Smurph. I appreciate the read & review.
~Dean

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Good. First review of the morning instead of the last review of night. Gripping flash fiction. Juliette should not have been released. I am unsurprised she kept a trophy of her parents. This was a ghastly, ghoulish tiny tale. Thank you for scaring.

 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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reply by the author on 09-May-2015

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Sis Cat. Much obliged...
~Dean

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

Another terrifying tale, Dean. You had me hooked from the first line and I thought that the tension you used to build up your scene and story was brilliant. I certainly wouldn't like to come across Juliette one of these days. Another great piece...Jacob

 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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reply by the author on 09-May-2015

Thanks, Jacob. I appreciate your feedback very much. ~Dean

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Very funny. Short and sweet but action packed. Story line easy to follow. She gave them more than just the finger. That's for sure. Write on.

 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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reply by the author on 09-May-2015

Thanks, Brett, much obliged. I'll try, my friend. :}
~Dean

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Not very scary, just gruesome. You have to feel sorry for the mentally ill, and she was NOT cured. She must have still been insane when she left, given the price of gold; she didn't take the rings with her. Crazy girl will have nothing to live on. :)

Found a flaw: If she is institutionalized for MURDER, they will NOT let her out after a "short time" no matter what.

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 Comment Written 09-May-2015

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reply by the author on 09-May-2015

Thanks, Phyllis, but maybe it wasn't murder she was institutionalized for. Ever seen the film, "Sling Blade", starring Billy Bob Thorton? He was institutionalized for murder and he got out. Granted it was several years later, but he got out. I may rethink that portion of the story, however. it's just 172 words as it it.

Thanks again for your suggestions and review.
~Dean :)

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 09-May-2015

Sling Blade is one of my favorite movies of all time... have watched it over and over. What a masterpiece!

reply by the author on 09-May-2015

Me too. It's destined to be a classic. :)