Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Oh how I love this cute story. It's nice how love can blooms sweet at the age even though it's puppy love.
But to them it's real specially since they have a ring.
Thank you for this delightful story.
Cookie.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Thank you very much, miss cookie. Always appreciayed.

John

reply by misscookie on 22-Apr-2015

You're very welcome.
Until next time, good night.
Cookie

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is adorable...

My daughter 'married' a little boy called Cosy when she was 5

This is so sweet and trusting. I loved it..I wish I had a six to give

God bless I especially loved the kiss and the wiping it off quickly

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

Kiwi, thank you so very much. John

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is terrific. Your dialogue is natural and the characters "feel" real. My only thought is at the start you have Tommy as the clear viewpoint character. You have internal thought. But that goes away as the story progresses. I would suggest you keep that viewpoint character tighter throughout the story. Terrific job. This was very enjoyable.

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2015

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2015

ML,
Great review.
Thank you very much.

John