Tiny Terrors
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Dog~ Gone"A collection of short horror fiction
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Comment from BreeVree
So, when it's done, this would be a book to read in the daytime and in bright light, right?
Pretty sure you meant to say 'scrawled on the bathroom mirror" not crawled....
Poor old Buttons.
Very nice representation of this creepy, creepy story.
Well done
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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So, when it's done, this would be a book to read in the daytime and in bright light, right?
Pretty sure you meant to say 'scrawled on the bathroom mirror" not crawled....
Poor old Buttons.
Very nice representation of this creepy, creepy story.
Well done
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Oops! Yeah, I did mean "scrawled", Bree, thanks for catching that. But thanks even more for reading and providing me with your feedback on the terror tail...er-r-r-r, heh-heh, I mean tale. It is appreciated.
~Dean :}
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Eeeewwww. I'll never let my Pepperoni out of my sight again!
Wow, gore galore in this one.
I reckon there isn't much hope for the little girl now. She'll be tomorrow's liverwurst!
Love the cat eyes in the dark before the flicks on. Super job in this one.
Oh, goodie, It's two a.m., and I'm off to dreamland. I will haunt you if I see spooks! (*<*) Just sayin', pal.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
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Eeeewwww. I'll never let my Pepperoni out of my sight again!
Wow, gore galore in this one.
I reckon there isn't much hope for the little girl now. She'll be tomorrow's liverwurst!
Love the cat eyes in the dark before the flicks on. Super job in this one.
Oh, goodie, It's two a.m., and I'm off to dreamland. I will haunt you if I see spooks! (*<*) Just sayin', pal.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*:*)
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2015
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2015
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Thanks, Jax. I'm glad you liked it.
Well, sleep tight, Jax, and pleasant...Nah...I won't wish my usual sign-off on you...pleasant dreams. (Geesh I'm getting too soft in my old age, LOL!)
`Dean ;)