Nature's Show
3-5-3 form93 total reviews
Comment from Jennpenn
As a horticulturist, I wholeheartedly agree with your word choice! No need to go to the movies when an amazing drama plays just outside our windows. Well done!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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As a horticulturist, I wholeheartedly agree with your word choice! No need to go to the movies when an amazing drama plays just outside our windows. Well done!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Jenn, you are so very right...thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from emjaihammond
How aptly put! Your Nature 3-5-3 poem is a strong entry for this contest. The art work you have paired your words with is a great addition. I have a feeling this one will do well.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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How aptly put! Your Nature 3-5-3 poem is a strong entry for this contest. The art work you have paired your words with is a great addition. I have a feeling this one will do well.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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HI Emjai, so glad to see you...it came in second with a few others...smiling...so glad you like it...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi - this is a perfect 3/5/3 which meets the requirements of the Nature prompt. You have made it sound like a movie in this context. It is perfectly correct, and not easy to get a message across in 11 syllables which you have managed to do. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi - this is a perfect 3/5/3 which meets the requirements of the Nature prompt. You have made it sound like a movie in this context. It is perfectly correct, and not easy to get a message across in 11 syllables which you have managed to do. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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HI Dorothy, thank you for a wonderful review...I came in second with a few others...smiling...so glad you like it...nature truly is a giant cinema show...beautiful..thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from dragonpoet
This tells of the beauty of nature and how it is more beautiful seen in person than in any movie. Though movies make you want to witness it in the flesh.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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This tells of the beauty of nature and how it is more beautiful seen in person than in any movie. Though movies make you want to witness it in the flesh.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Joan, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...nature is a beautiful cinema...came in second with a few others...smiling...thank you...Luff Linda xxoo
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You're welcome. Congratulations.
Joan
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from chasennov
3-5-3 form "Nature's Show" Now what can one say about that, really? Nature does have the best show on earth. Wherever you look, and wherever you go, nature is there to show you the beauty, the strength, and the justification. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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3-5-3 form "Nature's Show" Now what can one say about that, really? Nature does have the best show on earth. Wherever you look, and wherever you go, nature is there to show you the beauty, the strength, and the justification. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Chase, thank you so much for a great review...and I am with you...Luff Linda xxoo
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You are most welcome, Linda.
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from minopavlic
To be able to express yourself descriptively within a story is creativity beyond comprehension. However, to do so leaving a thunderous impact and meaning within so few words is in itself an exceptional achievement. The art work tells a story all of its own.
Thanks for sharing
Mino
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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To be able to express yourself descriptively within a story is creativity beyond comprehension. However, to do so leaving a thunderous impact and meaning within so few words is in itself an exceptional achievement. The art work tells a story all of its own.
Thanks for sharing
Mino
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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HI My sweet friend...I am half way through your book...it is wonderful Mino...they did a great job...and you did too...you should be so proud...smiling...and thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love the picture too...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Lost n Thought
I love how simple and beautiful this poem is. The overall presentation is lovely as well. An excellent piece, great job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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I love how simple and beautiful this poem is. The overall presentation is lovely as well. An excellent piece, great job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Lost, thank you so very much... I am so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Aussie
Your illustration shows it all! Three little lines and you have told us about nature in all her glory. I loved it and wish you well in the prompt entry. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Your illustration shows it all! Three little lines and you have told us about nature in all her glory. I loved it and wish you well in the prompt entry. Well done.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Kay, you sweet thing you...thank you so much for a great review...came in second with a few others...smiling...so glad you like it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from krazee3377
With the picture you choose it really made your words come to life. Excellent job on a truly hard write. I've never been able to do the syllable count. I'm so long winded. Thank you for sharing and having it make real sense.
Good luck, Heidi
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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With the picture you choose it really made your words come to life. Excellent job on a truly hard write. I've never been able to do the syllable count. I'm so long winded. Thank you for sharing and having it make real sense.
Good luck, Heidi
Comment Written 11-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2015
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Hi Heidi, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I didn't do them for awhile...and just started some time back...I am so glad you like it...and you are so welcome...luff Linda xxoo
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow! This is a great introduction to me for 3-5-3 poetry. I have never read one before. I like how you compress things. There is no greater show than nature. Thank you for expressing this eloquently.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Wow! This is a great introduction to me for 3-5-3 poetry. I have never read one before. I like how you compress things. There is no greater show than nature. Thank you for expressing this eloquently.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Sis Cat, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...
