Dolphins
...let them find your happiness44 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
The sea is a mystery and your poem stir the searching mind of myth. Dolphins can be the friend in need at the time lost in wonder. Thank you for sharing your darken thoughts. Shalom.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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The sea is a mystery and your poem stir the searching mind of myth. Dolphins can be the friend in need at the time lost in wonder. Thank you for sharing your darken thoughts. Shalom.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Many thanks, Ben. Dolphins do seem to suggest a light-hearted approach to life. In this respect, although somewhat endangered these days, they make a good metaphor.
Comment from poetbear
Great visual.
Like the nod to mythology.
Creative and very well written verse.
Reads and flows very well.
Great useofthe visual
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Great visual.
Like the nod to mythology.
Creative and very well written verse.
Reads and flows very well.
Great useofthe visual
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thanks very much, poet ear, for your kind review and six stars. Both much appreciated. Tony
Comment from livelylinda
Tony: applause, applause for originality. Bravo for short and to the point. A standing ovation for sharing your treasure chest of knowledge, legend and Greek mythology. And, the winner is . . . you and your readers. I'm not a fan of mythology, fairy dust, etc. but you put a dash of reality in this poem to keep my interest. Nice job. Linda
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Tony: applause, applause for originality. Bravo for short and to the point. A standing ovation for sharing your treasure chest of knowledge, legend and Greek mythology. And, the winner is . . . you and your readers. I'm not a fan of mythology, fairy dust, etc. but you put a dash of reality in this poem to keep my interest. Nice job. Linda
Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thanks, Linda. The ancient gods were a moody lot! LOL. I don't mind the odd sprinkling of fairy dust, as an escape from real life. Not so good to drop too far into a fantasy world though!
Comment from Genya
Thank you for your author notes. Really enjoyed reading them and brought the poem to life as it was tied into Greek Mythology. Loved the poem so visual and descriptive...loved the last stanza and in particular...dragged into crystal caves where Neptune reigns in a futile pool of tears. Lovely words and a lovely illustration. Genya
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Thank you for your author notes. Really enjoyed reading them and brought the poem to life as it was tied into Greek Mythology. Loved the poem so visual and descriptive...loved the last stanza and in particular...dragged into crystal caves where Neptune reigns in a futile pool of tears. Lovely words and a lovely illustration. Genya
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Comment Written 06-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Genya. Glad you enjoyed the poem!