Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

So, he shot and missed. Fun play on words. I guess he missed the entire car? She sure must be confused by his claim that her friends had reported she'd left class when she never was at a class. I guess if you're going to have a husband who gets pissed off, it's good to have one who's a bad aim. LOL
Brooke

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Yep, you got it, Brooke! Thanks for reviewing this for me. I really appreciate it.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

You've penned a 100 word dash/flash fiction story in very good fashion. It had all the components required and the twist at the end was the best - "Yeah, I'm really sorry I missed you too."

Best of luck in the contest... John

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thanks so much, John. I'm really glad you thought so. Much obliged, my friend!