If Some Could Tell!
If we were learned to tell! A Non-Fiction in 220 words112 total reviews
Comment from trailblazer101
He opens mouth ever to speak only for his lip or mouth joy or satisfaction. Sometimes, he speaks merely for mystic pleasure.
Wow. Profound!
By nature, he is unselfish. He tells nothing for pride, or happiness. He speaks not for a lip, or mystic satisfaction.
I try to be like that but probably fail a lot.
Well written, no errors and commas in the right places. Kudos. I seldom give a six. This one was worth it.
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He opens mouth ever to speak only for his lip or mouth joy or satisfaction. Sometimes, he speaks merely for mystic pleasure.
Wow. Profound!
By nature, he is unselfish. He tells nothing for pride, or happiness. He speaks not for a lip, or mystic satisfaction.
I try to be like that but probably fail a lot.
Well written, no errors and commas in the right places. Kudos. I seldom give a six. This one was worth it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from LIJ Red
This describes the ideal intellect, and follows the Bible's advice(let your communication be yea, yea or nay, nay for more than this cometh of folly)
I am afraid I don't always hew to the line...excellent post.
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This describes the ideal intellect, and follows the Bible's advice(let your communication be yea, yea or nay, nay for more than this cometh of folly)
I am afraid I don't always hew to the line...excellent post.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Ulla
I have a question for you. Are you on a mission here trying to preach to us all? I will be honest just as your wise man is, and that is that I have only reviewed your meagre offerings because of the phony Dollars. But this is the last time. The sentence structure is all wrong in this short piece, hence the four. Ulla
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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I have a question for you. Are you on a mission here trying to preach to us all? I will be honest just as your wise man is, and that is that I have only reviewed your meagre offerings because of the phony Dollars. But this is the last time. The sentence structure is all wrong in this short piece, hence the four. Ulla
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this nice review I appreciate. I learn also by the reviewers.
You may now revisit, I have edited the work.
Comment from Shanbreen
This tell-it-like-it-is, is well written, Just one suggestion: In my opinion, either keep Wise and Unwise as abstractions or use them as adjectives for a person. That should keep the uniformity throughout the essay. I believe, it would read better. Just a thought.
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This tell-it-like-it-is, is well written, Just one suggestion: In my opinion, either keep Wise and Unwise as abstractions or use them as adjectives for a person. That should keep the uniformity throughout the essay. I believe, it would read better. Just a thought.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Merajul
Great words of wisdom. It is really packed with lot of no-nonsense.
This is ultimate-
"Man has instinct of telling something. Wise is known by his act, art and science of telling"
You always kept it to the point.
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Great words of wisdom. It is really packed with lot of no-nonsense.
This is ultimate-
"Man has instinct of telling something. Wise is known by his act, art and science of telling"
You always kept it to the point.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written thought-provoking statement. Many people are talking the whole day long without saying anything purposeful. I agree rather stay silent when you have nothing worthy to say.
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A very well-written thought-provoking statement. Many people are talking the whole day long without saying anything purposeful. I agree rather stay silent when you have nothing worthy to say.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from royowen
I love the old saying "better to say nothing and appear to be wise, than to open your mouth and prove you are a fool." Beautifully written and presented, some great pearls of wisdom here. Well done, blessings, Riy
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I love the old saying "better to say nothing and appear to be wise, than to open your mouth and prove you are a fool." Beautifully written and presented, some great pearls of wisdom here. Well done, blessings, Riy
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful non-fiction write with a biblical and, yes, world-wise message - so very succinctly yet all-inclusively stated! :) :) Wisdom does not mean wordy ... a lesson for many. :) :)
Thank you so very much for sharing that timeless message with us today! :)
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A wonderful non-fiction write with a biblical and, yes, world-wise message - so very succinctly yet all-inclusively stated! :) :) Wisdom does not mean wordy ... a lesson for many. :) :)
Thank you so very much for sharing that timeless message with us today! :)
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written non fiction post about speaking wisely or not speaking at all. You used very good descriptive words and nice comments about act wise or unwise. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very well written non fiction post about speaking wisely or not speaking at all. You used very good descriptive words and nice comments about act wise or unwise. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Alcreator, Great saying by Plato about the wise and the unwise. The fool is full of folly, while the wise is full of strength and knows when to speak and when not to speak. Wisdom is described in the Bible. I've read the Book of Wisdom, and I find it clear and meaningful. Dove P.S. How do you revive a post? Can you tell me?
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Dear Alcreator, Great saying by Plato about the wise and the unwise. The fool is full of folly, while the wise is full of strength and knows when to speak and when not to speak. Wisdom is described in the Bible. I've read the Book of Wisdom, and I find it clear and meaningful. Dove P.S. How do you revive a post? Can you tell me?
Comment Written 13-Aug-2018