The Woman Of Discontent
A weird poem I wrote inspired by Yasue's Surreal artwork.82 total reviews
Comment from Cookie333
This picture sure has conjured up some unique word images, yours of the imagination. Thank you for sharing your creation with us all and I wish you well in the contest,
k
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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This picture sure has conjured up some unique word images, yours of the imagination. Thank you for sharing your creation with us all and I wish you well in the contest,
k
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you K.
Comment from c_lucas
This is a bit unusual, but it is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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This is a bit unusual, but it is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you lucas.
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You're welcome, Justin. Charlie
Comment from lorijean
She sure does look very sad indeed, sort of just floating through life, a great little poem, well written and a pleasure to read.....
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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She sure does look very sad indeed, sort of just floating through life, a great little poem, well written and a pleasure to read.....
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you Lori.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
Wonderful piece! Not weird for me. Love the metaphors used in this poem. The artwork is great too. I really enjoyed it.
AMAZING job Justin!
:)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Wonderful piece! Not weird for me. Love the metaphors used in this poem. The artwork is great too. I really enjoyed it.
AMAZING job Justin!
:)
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you Aurora.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I love that last line, 'the eternal energies of the imagination,' truly poetic. I'm with you on the picture... it looks a little crazy and could be getting a view of a crazy world... perhaps that explains why it looks so crazy! Giddy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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I love that last line, 'the eternal energies of the imagination,' truly poetic. I'm with you on the picture... it looks a little crazy and could be getting a view of a crazy world... perhaps that explains why it looks so crazy! Giddy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you Giddy.
Comment from chasennov
'The Woman Of Discontent.' Your poem is one of many having used this art form, and did something with it. This amazes me having watched it now for quite a while, but well done.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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'The Woman Of Discontent.' Your poem is one of many having used this art form, and did something with it. This amazes me having watched it now for quite a while, but well done.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you Chase.
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You're most welcome.
Comment from emjaihammond
I am happy to see a different sort of look at this poor woman we have been staring at for so long. I thought this was a good writing for the visual provided. It makes us look a little further than the usual. I enjoyed.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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I am happy to see a different sort of look at this poor woman we have been staring at for so long. I thought this was a good writing for the visual provided. It makes us look a little further than the usual. I enjoyed.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you emajaihammond.
Comment from tbacha58
You described that portrait perfectly, I saw before and I
was intrigued by why is that face so familiar, one cannot
read any expressions except it an original painting.
I used for my poems. T
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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You described that portrait perfectly, I saw before and I
was intrigued by why is that face so familiar, one cannot
read any expressions except it an original painting.
I used for my poems. T
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2013
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Thank you T.
Comment from Gungalo
Certainly are right about it being surreal Justin. But, I like it.
For it is a world created by
The eternal energies of the imagination.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Certainly are right about it being surreal Justin. But, I like it.
For it is a world created by
The eternal energies of the imagination.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Gungalo.
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Smile
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'The Woman Of Discontent' is an interesting and thought-provoking piece. In my opinion this poem is open to several interpretations. It was a pleasure to review a work of this caliber.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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'The Woman Of Discontent' is an interesting and thought-provoking piece. In my opinion this poem is open to several interpretations. It was a pleasure to review a work of this caliber.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2013
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Thank you Duchess.
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Justin Chopin, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess