And then there's Grace
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Harvest"A collection of Spirtual poems
75 total reviews
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Your testimony in aabb rhymed quatrains is inspiring, notesandmore, despite the uneven rhythm. Well presented, with a lovely illustration. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
Your testimony in aabb rhymed quatrains is inspiring, notesandmore, despite the uneven rhythm. Well presented, with a lovely illustration. :) Nancy
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thank you Nancy, :-) Carolyn
Comment from gaangel62
Thank you for a beautiful poem..very well written and shows the love of our God. Thanks for sharing your poetry and being a witness to the amazing love of God.
Angie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
Thank you for a beautiful poem..very well written and shows the love of our God. Thanks for sharing your poetry and being a witness to the amazing love of God.
Angie
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Good Morning Angie, and thank you. Have a great day, Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
Your faith and belief in God shines through on this poem Carolyn. Your carefully chosen words blend and flow intricately with each other line for line.
It read it a few times to get an understanding on it, but that's just me and my battle with poetry.
Nicely done and a good way to start my day....
John
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
Your faith and belief in God shines through on this poem Carolyn. Your carefully chosen words blend and flow intricately with each other line for line.
It read it a few times to get an understanding on it, but that's just me and my battle with poetry.
Nicely done and a good way to start my day....
John
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Thanks John, I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Have a wonderful day, BTW, between writing, delivering papers, catering, etc and etc, and wasting time on that 'other ball' club, when do you find time to sleep. Hehehe... Carolyn
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of sticking with the aabb rhyme scheme. The rhyming is good, this piece flows well as the writer does a good job of not forcing the rhymes. The photo compliments the piece well as the message is the icing on the cake. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
The writer does a good job of sticking with the aabb rhyme scheme. The rhyming is good, this piece flows well as the writer does a good job of not forcing the rhymes. The photo compliments the piece well as the message is the icing on the cake. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your review and thank you. :-) Carolyn
Comment from amarherig14
I was saving the 6 stars for the one and only deserving of it. Yes, those of us who know the Lord should share the Good News so others get to know what everlasting love means. There is the truth of forgiveness of sins and everlasting life which only He can give.No one will be the same person , the old one dies a new one is reborn.I loved this statement you have written and proclaimed .To Him be the Glory!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
I was saving the 6 stars for the one and only deserving of it. Yes, those of us who know the Lord should share the Good News so others get to know what everlasting love means. There is the truth of forgiveness of sins and everlasting life which only He can give.No one will be the same person , the old one dies a new one is reborn.I loved this statement you have written and proclaimed .To Him be the Glory!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I am humbled by your sweet and honest review. The stars top it off. Thank you so much, Carolyn
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You are welcome ,Carolyn.Thanks for the very nice words.I was saving the six atars for something to come along worth of the high rating. Blessings,Margie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the harvest that is coming soon, I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the harvest that is coming soon, I enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I appreciate your good wishes and I am so happy you enjoyed the poem. Carolyn
Comment from Ridley Williams
A very spiritual, heartfelt piece of work,
your faith shines through in this poem and
your message is clearly felt, well thought
out and written, Ridley
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
A very spiritual, heartfelt piece of work,
your faith shines through in this poem and
your message is clearly felt, well thought
out and written, Ridley
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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Hi Ridley, ( I like that name !) Thank you for taking the time to read and review, have a great day. Carolyn
Comment from GregoryCody
Great on rest entry! Your structure is unique but follows perfectly. Your flow is sublime, your word choices fantastic. I love the message here as well and honestly, I Love the colors! ;)
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
Great on rest entry! Your structure is unique but follows perfectly. Your flow is sublime, your word choices fantastic. I love the message here as well and honestly, I Love the colors! ;)
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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It is a bright one, isn't it? I am glad you enjoyed it. Carolyn
Comment from chasennov
'Harvest.' An excellent poem you wrote here, which I found well formulated. I enjoyed the read and thought it was also neatly structured.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
'Harvest.' An excellent poem you wrote here, which I found well formulated. I enjoyed the read and thought it was also neatly structured.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2013
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I am glad you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn
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You're always welcome, Carolyn.
Comment from Titanx9
This is an excellent, motivational poem for all those who are out in the fields of life bringing in souls to the Kingdom. Jesus said the harvest was plentiful, but the workers are few. All Christians are ambassadors of Christ and should be out harvesting. Great job!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
This is an excellent, motivational poem for all those who are out in the fields of life bringing in souls to the Kingdom. Jesus said the harvest was plentiful, but the workers are few. All Christians are ambassadors of Christ and should be out harvesting. Great job!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2013
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Thank you for your wonderful comments. I am glad you enjoyed this one. And you are so right. Carolyn