Rabbit
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Way With Chickens"A Boy's Story of the rural South
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Comment from vapros
Five stars tonight for a fable as good as any of Aesop's. Your friend Virge, while making the ridiculous assumption that he knew the minds of chickens, managed to concoct a story with a moral, proving himself just a tiny bit smarter than a chicken. You have written about it quite ably, and I am impressed.
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Five stars tonight for a fable as good as any of Aesop's. Your friend Virge, while making the ridiculous assumption that he knew the minds of chickens, managed to concoct a story with a moral, proving himself just a tiny bit smarter than a chicken. You have written about it quite ably, and I am impressed.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013
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Thank you for reading and your kind comments. Bill
Comment from Judy Couch
I love the dialog between the Rabbit and Virge. I like the lesson of the story and the way the old man is teaching the kid. I love the way you started the chapter: "Chickens are really dumb." We live in the country and have half a dozen hens so I can identify with the care of the chickens. It was fun reading this story.
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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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I love the dialog between the Rabbit and Virge. I like the lesson of the story and the way the old man is teaching the kid. I love the way you started the chapter: "Chickens are really dumb." We live in the country and have half a dozen hens so I can identify with the care of the chickens. It was fun reading this story.
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Comment Written 19-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013
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Thanks for reading Judy - I have to apologize. I wasn't ready to release and got fat fingers. I do appreciate your input. Warm regards, Bill
