Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

This is very good, a very sensual poem about the sea, but it is NOT adults only...not at all. That category is for graphic sex that discusses penises and vaginas and sex acts openly. :)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2012

Thanks Phyllis for your great review. I will change the rating, I just thought that the 'busty' picture might be a problem.

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 19-Sep-2012

The picture of the mermaid's body is so tiny no one will notice... or mind if they do. Just look at the picture I used here... no one complained.

http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=519233

Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid

Excellent

Aloha Curly Girly, Sounds like your wrote about me and my ocean. I like the words, rhyme, artwork and everything about your poem, Thank you for sharing. Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012

You are proving to be a true and loyal fan! Thank you so much Hawaiian Mermaid.

Comment from saban

Excellent

i love the imagery of the white horses riding waves. checked out your website IMPRESSIVE especially ( the eyes of ) the horses

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012

Oh thank you! You were very kind to visit my website! Thanks for a wonderful review. I hope you have a good day / evening.

Comment from bossladyone

Excellent

I like it. The picture and the color scheme give the poem greater impact. The rhythm of the poem is very nice. It is well written. The word combinations describing the see gives a vivid picture in the mind. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012

Thank you so much for your kind review!

Comment from tklivory

Excellent

Well constructed in the continual stream of couplets. It helped convey a restless yet controlled surge - like the subject matter - of up and down, regular and constant. I loved the subject matter of the sea, and you did a wonderful job evoking different aspects of the sea from the literal, to history, to literature and myth, to personal. An excellent expression of the sea's restlessness and mystery.

Also, I wanted to compliment the art piece. It is beautiful and a wonderful complement to the poem itself.

(NOTE: odd it was behind an 'adult' wall. I presume this was due to the picture and *gasp* naked mermaid? Ah, well)

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2012

Thank you enormously for your detailed and complementary review. Good comments about my art are always pleasing, thanks again!
I put the age restriction on - not sure about nudity on this site.