Comment from
JennyB32
Very cute for kids. I did get caught up in the moment, wondering what was around his mouth. I was thinking a mouse trap : ( Glad he was saved by his dad. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
Thank you so much for the lovely review!!! Dad's can be quite helpful at times, love them! Thank you! xsx
Comment from
dmt1967
This is a very good poem as always I love you stuff I would give you a 6 but I haven't got any left good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2012
Thank you so much for your lovely words! I am glad you like it and thank you for the good luck! xsx