All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Three Faces of Love"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from kashmayank
nice work a bit long but enjoyed reading it ,the different form of loves and how care is an integral part of it ,all the best for future
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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nice work a bit long but enjoyed reading it ,the different form of loves and how care is an integral part of it ,all the best for future
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx kasha! it's 30 lines
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
I like your approach to
defining what love is...
cleverly thoughtout and
well presented.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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I like your approach to
defining what love is...
cleverly thoughtout and
well presented.
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx Margaret!
Comment from Onixxiya
it is just wonderful how you have shown love in all its facets here. The style of picture and colours add to your meaning, not that your words need any addition. Lovely.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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it is just wonderful how you have shown love in all its facets here. The style of picture and colours add to your meaning, not that your words need any addition. Lovely.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx so much my dear! :)
Comment from Oldsteamer
Very nice!
I don't understand a mothers love because I didn't have one but I do understand the love for a grandson. More than life itself. I imagine that's how God feels about us only ten fold. The love of lovers is there also.
Good free verse.
Regards,
- R -
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Very nice!
I don't understand a mothers love because I didn't have one but I do understand the love for a grandson. More than life itself. I imagine that's how God feels about us only ten fold. The love of lovers is there also.
Good free verse.
Regards,
- R -
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Then you will understand that love too - even though a degree removed, the love for a child is indeed unique my dear!
Comment from ennahanid
This is a most interesting look at love - reminds me of the old dressing tables with three mirrors (my Mum had one) and so you get the three images of the same person. The parent, the lover and carer of all. Thank you for this gentle read this morning - I found it a pleasure - Dinah
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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This is a most interesting look at love - reminds me of the old dressing tables with three mirrors (my Mum had one) and so you get the three images of the same person. The parent, the lover and carer of all. Thank you for this gentle read this morning - I found it a pleasure - Dinah
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx Dinah - I remember those dressing tables too - my grandmother had one! glad you enjoyed the gentle read!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You have expressed the three faces of love, perfectly. The love of the mother, possibly being the strongest of all. This is an excellent contest entry, and could make a worthy winner, I wish you the very best of luck! xsx
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You have expressed the three faces of love, perfectly. The love of the mother, possibly being the strongest of all. This is an excellent contest entry, and could make a worthy winner, I wish you the very best of luck! xsx
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx Sandie!
Comment from snemes
I enjoyed your beautiful and accurate descriptions of the different kinds of love. There is the pure love of the parent for the child, the excitement of romantic love, and the glorious love of God. The ultimate journey to which we all aspire, a'fire with dreaming phosphorescent glory. Excellent way to describe something of almost unimaginable magnificence.
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I enjoyed your beautiful and accurate descriptions of the different kinds of love. There is the pure love of the parent for the child, the excitement of romantic love, and the glorious love of God. The ultimate journey to which we all aspire, a'fire with dreaming phosphorescent glory. Excellent way to describe something of almost unimaginable magnificence.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Why thank you SOOOO much for reading and enjoying my dear - and a very special "thank you" for your magic '6' which has made my morning coffee all the sweeter!:)
Comment from steevie
Three Faces of Love.
What can we say about love?
Well, you have described three different ways in this detailed writing.
I think my favorite love would have to be the first one.
My mother, when I was a child, always looked out for me and tried her best to keep me safe. I didn't always appreciate the methiods she used to supress some of my childhood ambitions, but I do love my mom.
I enjoyed your poem. It read well and smoothly
All the best in the contest
steve
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Three Faces of Love.
What can we say about love?
Well, you have described three different ways in this detailed writing.
I think my favorite love would have to be the first one.
My mother, when I was a child, always looked out for me and tried her best to keep me safe. I didn't always appreciate the methiods she used to supress some of my childhood ambitions, but I do love my mom.
I enjoyed your poem. It read well and smoothly
All the best in the contest
steve
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx Steevie!
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you're welcome
steve
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Three Faces of Love' is quite a well-written and intriguing piece, but would in my opinion benefit with more stringent editing. This was an interesting piece to both read and review.
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'Three Faces of Love' is quite a well-written and intriguing piece, but would in my opinion benefit with more stringent editing. This was an interesting piece to both read and review.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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then please feel free to offer suggestions dd!
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visionary1234, I'm right out of suggestions at the moment!
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Excellent definitions of the various kinds of love in your free verse poem. It is the lucys person who has all three. Well done. :) nancy
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Excellent definitions of the various kinds of love in your free verse poem. It is the lucys person who has all three. Well done. :) nancy
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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thx Nancy!