Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Lovely Soul"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from LisaSilva
Something I hope for, can't wait for in some ways. I'm so glad you have this hope when so many are left with only the pain. Your words are encouraging to other who all will face this pain, if not now, one day.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Something I hope for, can't wait for in some ways. I'm so glad you have this hope when so many are left with only the pain. Your words are encouraging to other who all will face this pain, if not now, one day.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your great and wonderful review! Merry Christmas!
Comment from FlamingSpade
When I read your description I was convinced your story would be a survival story. And, it is...but it has been how you survived and handled it. Bravo.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011
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When I read your description I was convinced your story would be a survival story. And, it is...but it has been how you survived and handled it. Bravo.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2011
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Thank you so much FlamingSpade for your great review, and its true, she's dancing in heaven. Love Sarah and Merry Christmas to you!
Comment from william0799
This is a wonderful thought expressed a wonderful poem. I don't think that your sister's sun has set; I think it has risen. You and your sister have my prayers. Please keep writing.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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This is a wonderful thought expressed a wonderful poem. I don't think that your sister's sun has set; I think it has risen. You and your sister have my prayers. Please keep writing.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging review. Yes, I agree, she's in heaven. Merry Christmas to you!
Comment from estabuttons
Beautiful poem for your beautiful sister. She is at peace and with the Lord in his heaven! Something we have to long for and look forward to! God Bless you Sarah!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Beautiful poem for your beautiful sister. She is at peace and with the Lord in his heaven! Something we have to long for and look forward to! God Bless you Sarah!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your kind review! Yes we look forward to it because our spirit longs for peace! Sarah
Comment from Paula Andrea Pyle
I can certainly see and appreciate the divine beauty embedded in these comforting words. I especially like the fact that you are comforted by them.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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I can certainly see and appreciate the divine beauty embedded in these comforting words. I especially like the fact that you are comforted by them.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thank you for your heartfelt review, so true and beautiful. Sarah
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Thank you for you kind review Paula, God's Love is forever. Sarah
Comment from viviane.leite
Beautiful way to portray such a painful moment. I liked mostly the sound repetition on the first sentence and also the horses, lovely animals...hope one day I live closer to them.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Beautiful way to portray such a painful moment. I liked mostly the sound repetition on the first sentence and also the horses, lovely animals...hope one day I live closer to them.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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I really like your review especially that you mention the horses, which I love very much. Are you on Facebook? Let's see! Sarah
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NP Sarah. Facebook...well my account is closed now, I'm considering opening again, but 'm in G+ anyway. See ya!
Comment from adewpearl
nice use of rhyming couplets
excellent consonance of L sounds throughout
What a beautifully expressive poem, Sarah. You convey the speaker's solace so well in knowing her loved one is now in eternal peace :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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nice use of rhyming couplets
excellent consonance of L sounds throughout
What a beautifully expressive poem, Sarah. You convey the speaker's solace so well in knowing her loved one is now in eternal peace :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thank you for this very helpful and encouraging review. Lovely to read. Sarah
Comment from cathmine
Sara, This poem expresses such peace. You know where your beloved sister is resting. One day we will join in that joy and ecstasy. My condolences.
Cathmine
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Sara, This poem expresses such peace. You know where your beloved sister is resting. One day we will join in that joy and ecstasy. My condolences.
Cathmine
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2011
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and faith building review. You are very kind. Sarah
