My Little Muranos
the night life79 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
This is interesting free verse, dripping with suggestion and evocative of the slightly tawdry setting of the bar. I liked it that you didn't feel you had to explain too much. Loved these lines
Such power
atop
the mammalian tree.
and the scissorin' and unscissorin'
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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This is interesting free verse, dripping with suggestion and evocative of the slightly tawdry setting of the bar. I liked it that you didn't feel you had to explain too much. Loved these lines
Such power
atop
the mammalian tree.
and the scissorin' and unscissorin'
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I'm pleased you approve. (sincerely) Sometimes that phrase has a sarcastic ring to it. I'm quite confident you would not mistake my sarcasm when I let it out the barn door. LOL
Comment from JW
This is an interesting poem and through your great use of description and imagery one can easily see the scene before them. Thanks for sharing this. I had never seen a Muranos before and it's beautiful. JW
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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This is an interesting poem and through your great use of description and imagery one can easily see the scene before them. Thanks for sharing this. I had never seen a Muranos before and it's beautiful. JW
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you. I'm not sure the picture is Murano glass. But it does lean that way.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi victortouche
I raise my glass to you sir, not a Muranos unfortunately, LOL
Your free verse conjures up some imaginative and exotic images in my head, which I thank you for.
Love the following lines:
Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
Simply magic.
Kind regards, Pete
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Hi victortouche
I raise my glass to you sir, not a Muranos unfortunately, LOL
Your free verse conjures up some imaginative and exotic images in my head, which I thank you for.
Love the following lines:
Those legs
just scissorin'
and unscissorin' me.
Simply magic.
Kind regards, Pete
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you Pete. My favorite lines as well.
Comment from peggles
I had never heard of The Muranos
I thought this flow very well with its slight undertones of lust and expectations. I thought the art work was exquisite and set off your work perfectly
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I had never heard of The Muranos
I thought this flow very well with its slight undertones of lust and expectations. I thought the art work was exquisite and set off your work perfectly
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Don't think I can ask for much more. (or should) Thank you.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a great expression not just of the culture in bars but the male psyche, or at least one aspect of it. Love the internal powerplay. Very well executed.
Mike
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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This is a great expression not just of the culture in bars but the male psyche, or at least one aspect of it. Love the internal powerplay. Very well executed.
Mike
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you Mike.
Comment from Janie King
Thanks for explaining a muranos is..she crosses her legs..I thought this was the muranos but now I think it is a lady that is frinking out of a muranos..This describes a scene I've never been in..a bar. It's very descriptive and well-written. God bless.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thanks for explaining a muranos is..she crosses her legs..I thought this was the muranos but now I think it is a lady that is frinking out of a muranos..This describes a scene I've never been in..a bar. It's very descriptive and well-written. God bless.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your sensual, yet innocent poem. Your notes also educated me I did not know what The Muranos were. Thank you for that.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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I enjoyed reading your sensual, yet innocent poem. Your notes also educated me I did not know what The Muranos were. Thank you for that.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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You're more than welcome and thank you for reading me.
Comment from chita
Your author notes are superb-you have great artwork and I love Murano glass-it is used in jewelry making a lot--I love how you are drawn to the night life and we all have been there before--a well penned write-great job.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Your author notes are superb-you have great artwork and I love Murano glass-it is used in jewelry making a lot--I love how you are drawn to the night life and we all have been there before--a well penned write-great job.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Thank you. A very nice review. Of course yours usually are.
Comment from lola29
You brought the scene to life for me, and I so admire your gifted talented to be able to describe so vididly your reminiscence of your night out.
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You brought the scene to life for me, and I so admire your gifted talented to be able to describe so vididly your reminiscence of your night out.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Of course that is music to a writer's ears. Thank you.
Comment from Larrypic11
You did a wonderful job of setting the mood of a darkened bar, and a seduction of both drink and sexuality. I klove the last two lines. They are a fitting ending. Larry
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You did a wonderful job of setting the mood of a darkened bar, and a seduction of both drink and sexuality. I klove the last two lines. They are a fitting ending. Larry
Comment Written 14-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2011
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Nice review. You can send along any of these you can find. Thank you.