The Phone Call
Contest entry43 total reviews
Comment from RebelRose
Very good Flash Fiction. Well written with a good plot and story line. The most frustrating thing in the world would have to be being accused and convicted of a crime and not being able to convince anyone of your innocence.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Very good Flash Fiction. Well written with a good plot and story line. The most frustrating thing in the world would have to be being accused and convicted of a crime and not being able to convince anyone of your innocence.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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I cannot think of anything worse. Glad you liked it despite its dark nature.
Comment from Begin Again
Sasha,
Wow..this most definitely was different from your humorous writings..but entertaining as well. Gave me chills but I admit I too would wonder how one would deal with knowing their innocent, but destined to die anyhow. I especially liked the last line about Answering prayers.
Smiles, CArol
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Sasha,
Wow..this most definitely was different from your humorous writings..but entertaining as well. Gave me chills but I admit I too would wonder how one would deal with knowing their innocent, but destined to die anyhow. I especially liked the last line about Answering prayers.
Smiles, CArol
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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Thank you. I must be going through a dark phase....blame it on the pain medication.
Comment from Joan E.
You certainly got into the mind of an innocent person accused of murder, who both becomes too tired to fight anymore and begins to look forward to the peace death will bring. I particularly admired your character's carefully considered remarks to the warden at the end. Best wishes in the contest with this strong entry.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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You certainly got into the mind of an innocent person accused of murder, who both becomes too tired to fight anymore and begins to look forward to the peace death will bring. I particularly admired your character's carefully considered remarks to the warden at the end. Best wishes in the contest with this strong entry.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2010
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I guess I am in a dark mood...blame it on the pain medication. Thanks for the great review. I sincerely appreciate it. Flash fiction is still an effort for me but practice make perfect. or so they say.
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Hope the pain medication is making you comfortable; it certainly is not interfering with your imagination or your ability to keep the story sharp and free of excess words as Flash requires. Again, good luck in the contest and heal quickly. -Joan
