Comment from dmjones

Excellent

Hi Carol, this is really cute. Beth is adorable and sassy and it shows through in these few words. I enjoyed reading it. I didn't spot any errors.

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010

Donna,

I was just reviewing your last chapter..terrific! Glad you liked this short but sassy entry. Smiles, Carol

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I like the clever retorts in this most amusing dialogue - the explanations sound perfectly logical to me - what a cute relationship between this father and daughter. A fun scene, Carol. Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010

Brooke,

I didn't share the same type of relationship but I often dream I had..Glad it came across realistic and you enjoyed it. I did too! Smiles, Carol

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with leaving the male species wanting. It has a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. Good luck in your contest.

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 Comment Written 22-Apr-2010

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2010

Charlie,

Need to take a ppoke at the male species every once in a while...keep them on their toes...something they seem to do to us as well. Thanks for the kind review. Smiles, CArol

reply by c_lucas on 22-Apr-2010

You're welcome, Carol. Charlie