Contest Entry and Winners
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Taken"Short Stories
48 total reviews
Comment from BJean
This is very well written and kept my interest. What a surprise ending and he was saved in the nick of time to join his love in the protection. I like happy endings. good job. Love, Jean
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2010
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This is very well written and kept my interest. What a surprise ending and he was saved in the nick of time to join his love in the protection. I like happy endings. good job. Love, Jean
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2010
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Jean,
Thank you so much for your great review and all the continued support. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from harleyangelbrat
This is a winner! I love your story. It brings the characters to life. It is very descriptive and interesting. It captures every mood possible. It kept my interest and I was left wishing there was more to read. I enjoyed it very much. Excellent read! I think you have a winner here. I wish you all the best in the contest. God bless!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2010
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This is a winner! I love your story. It brings the characters to life. It is very descriptive and interesting. It captures every mood possible. It kept my interest and I was left wishing there was more to read. I enjoyed it very much. Excellent read! I think you have a winner here. I wish you all the best in the contest. God bless!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2010
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harleyangelbrat,
Thank you so much for your great review and all the continued support. Smiles to you, Carol
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You are always welcome. I hope you have a blessed day. Marilyn
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
What a great storyline, but what a dreadful shock for Jason, never mind the heartache of the time between.
However, at least they get together eventually, even if they have to be on teh witness protection programme.
Juliette
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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What a great storyline, but what a dreadful shock for Jason, never mind the heartache of the time between.
However, at least they get together eventually, even if they have to be on teh witness protection programme.
Juliette
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Juliette,
Thank you very much for reading and enjoying my story. I appreciate the comments. Smiles to you...
Comment from RazberryBullet
What a lovely surprise ending! Great tension throughout.
Liked these lines especially: For weeks, I begged God to take my life, too. He either wasn't listening or didn't understand. :)
Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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What a lovely surprise ending! Great tension throughout.
Liked these lines especially: For weeks, I begged God to take my life, too. He either wasn't listening or didn't understand. :)
Well done!
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Razberry,
thank you for reading and for your wonderful comments. I am so pleased that you enjoyed the story. smiles to you....
Comment from RaymondJohn
Nice surprise ending, though I had an inkling from the start. I guess it comes from watching TV. Very strong narrative. The first paragraph drew me in immediately, and I had to know what happened. Best of luck in the competition. You have a very fine story. Ray.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Nice surprise ending, though I had an inkling from the start. I guess it comes from watching TV. Very strong narrative. The first paragraph drew me in immediately, and I had to know what happened. Best of luck in the competition. You have a very fine story. Ray.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Ray
Awesome...Coming from a writer as yourself, I am thrilled by your comments. Thank you so much for appreciating my story and for the dusting of stars. Smiles to you.....
Comment from Lynnda
You did a nice job of incorporating the word list into "Taken." Your skill in writing the story drew me into it so well that I had to read it twice to find all of them.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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You did a nice job of incorporating the word list into "Taken." Your skill in writing the story drew me into it so well that I had to read it twice to find all of them.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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lynnda,
Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. I really appreciate it very much. smiles to you....
Comment from Mariea
A very well written piece that kept me involved all the way. Good fast moving story without any clutter or 'spags' that were apparent.
Have a great day, regards Mia
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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A very well written piece that kept me involved all the way. Good fast moving story without any clutter or 'spags' that were apparent.
Have a great day, regards Mia
Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Mia,
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying the story. I truly appreciate your time and comments. Smiles to you.....
Comment from Arkine
Well, it's a darn good thing they got there when they did, otherwise she would have witnessed him blow his fool brains out all over her empty grave. Oie. Nicely done! Good luck with the contest. :)
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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Well, it's a darn good thing they got there when they did, otherwise she would have witnessed him blow his fool brains out all over her empty grave. Oie. Nicely done! Good luck with the contest. :)
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Comment Written 03-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2010
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Arkine,
Yes...luckily it's just a story so I can have them arrive just in the nick of time....Thank you for the kind review. Smiles to you...