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Comment from phaedra
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Think she looked just fine to Prince Gargoyle. With a name like that he couldn't be to choosy.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    phaedra,

    Right! Thanks for the wonderful review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from pugdogy
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this is a very well written piece of work,,,I love the picture you have included with this story,,,how you came up with this story just by the prompt orange socks amazes me...very enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    pugdogy,

    Sometimes I amaze myself! LOL I'm not sure where all of my ideas come from...especially at midnight! Thanks for the review...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mrs Jones
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This is so cute. Love the story and the picture.
"orange socks and combat boots." Think you started a new trend.
Good luck in the contest, Carol.
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Rose,

    Right! It will be all the rave! LOL Thanks for the wonderful review. CArol
Comment from dmjones
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The witch kind of looks like me :) A very cute and even warmhearted story because he chose her even before he knew. Not did you have a good theme you also had a good moral. No errors found.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Donna,

    We must be family...because she looks a lot like a self portrait as well. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from Curt Mongold
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That pic is a hoot, I thought maybe I could introduce her to my disgusting American male, but I see she is already taken!
A very cute story on not judging a book by it's cover, as I just did!
A pleasure,
Curt

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Curt,

    Thanks for the wonderful review and smile...Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from RobinWrites
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What a vivid story. I wonder how he knew the witch was a beauty underneath? Or, did he? The old saying of not being able to tell a book from its cover it so true. Great job writing a complete picture with only a few words.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
    Robin,

    Thanks for the great review. Always appreciate hearing from you. smiles, Carol
Comment from misscookie
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I love this poem very much
and I think children will love it also
there s a siory within this poem
this is a cute write.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
    Cookie

    Glad you liked my reverse Cinderella micro fiction...Hope you are feeling well..Smiles, Carol
reply by misscookie on 17-Feb-2010
    i'm feeling much better still confused some what can't remember who i relyped to
Comment from Thesis
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Lol, where did you find that dancing witch, priceless.

I liked the idea of the spells and the witches trying to make themselves look beautiful, then there is Drusilla over there doing her own thing. Good fun read. - John

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
    John,

    Took it from one of my personal photos.Surprised to didn't recognize me. I was a bit younger when it was taken..LOL Thank you for enjoying this silly little story. Smiles, Carol
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
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I like the twist at the end of this micro-fairy-tale,
my friend. It is well written with no spags to note.
Good luck in the contest. I'm sure you'll do well.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
    El Gato

    Glad you enjoyed my reverse Cinderella..I appreciate the comments and generous stars. Smiles, Carol
Comment from missy98writer
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Carol,
What an excellent story in 100 words. I liked the use of orange socks and combat boots. Wise of the Cinderella in reverse to have herself a quirky old woman. You have great imagination. As always your writing is wonderful. I bet you could write the phone book and make it entertaining. Your writing has great imagery and a voice. The art work you did matches the story perfectly. I bet this wins the micro fiction contest, it's a winner in my opinion.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
    Melissa

    Wow...you've made my morning for sure, girl friend. What more praise could one ask for? Thank you so much for enjoying the silly little story. I find it harder to write these short things than a regular story...I'm not one to be short on words, I guess. smiles, Carol
reply by missy98writer on 17-Feb-2010
    I couldn't write 100 words, I'm too wordy. I prefer writing book chapters over short works.
    Melissa.