Comment from
Cooper Watt
Nicely done, my friend. You nailed the no-S aspect, obviously, but succeeded in delivering an emotional impact with such few words. Cool! Good luck! Coop.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
Cooper
I am thrilled that you enjoyed this little story. It was harder than I thought to write with out an s. Smiles to you...
Comment from
Kaiyah
a beautiful and descriptive piece filled with emotion and imagery. great choice and se of words.
a thoroughly enjoyed read.
well wishes and best of luck. well done!
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2010
Kaiyah
So pleased that you enjoyed the story. I appreciate it very much...Smiles to you,