Comment from wheelswrites

Good

All grieve in different ways. Sometimes to deeply to cry. Having said this there are errors in the presentation. V4, L3 two nevers -not sure what you meant, V5, L2 to {DO} maybe. Intricate V2, L4 try delicate instead. The definition of this word doesn't fit. Keep writing. It helps heal all pain.

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2010

Thank you, Actually two of them had been corrected. It got released before I was through editing. I did take your suggestion for the delicate. Thanks for the review.

reply by wheelswrites on 04-Jan-2010

You are welcome. I take time with something I like.

Comment from abeetle

Excellent

This is very deep and moving. You described a mothers love perfectly. I sure enjoyed the risk you took expressing yourself, it came out beautifully! Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 04-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2010

Thank you so must for the great review.