POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Xylok
what an emotionally riveting and extremely passionate piece you have shared with us. it says all that it needs to say and more as well as it could possibly be said. a beautiful poem.
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what an emotionally riveting and extremely passionate piece you have shared with us. it says all that it needs to say and more as well as it could possibly be said. a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Xylok
Thank you for reading and understanding the feelings behind the words. I appreciate it very much.
CArol
Comment from Jersey Dreamer
Hi Begin Again,
I agree with you, I liked your poem very much,
I believe in angels, but I also know the angels that are living amongst us are in fact our children and need our love and protection at all cost,
Thank you for sharing your poem,
Kind regards
Jersey dreamer
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Hi Begin Again,
I agree with you, I liked your poem very much,
I believe in angels, but I also know the angels that are living amongst us are in fact our children and need our love and protection at all cost,
Thank you for sharing your poem,
Kind regards
Jersey dreamer
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Jersey dreamer
I was blessed to have had him for four years and I am blessed with his love forever. Thanks CArol
Comment from Rvaltaysesd
Beautiful love poem, short and full of feelings, express great love, luck in the contest, good lines, good words, very good poem, greetings Rvaltaysesd
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Beautiful love poem, short and full of feelings, express great love, luck in the contest, good lines, good words, very good poem, greetings Rvaltaysesd
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Rvaltaysesd
Haven't heard from you in awhile...Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem. Carol
Comment from rama devi
A lovely entry for the contest, Carol. Great photo too. What a smile!
This is one of the purest loves there is---a mother's love.
And I know, from your stories, how deep, unwavering, precious and self-sacrificing your love for him is.
Blessings,
rama devi
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A lovely entry for the contest, Carol. Great photo too. What a smile!
This is one of the purest loves there is---a mother's love.
And I know, from your stories, how deep, unwavering, precious and self-sacrificing your love for him is.
Blessings,
rama devi
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Rama devi
His smile is spectacular and greets me each morning. I know his love lives forever in my heart. Thank you for reading.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from sugardog
A sweet, beautiful poem for a beautiful boy. Your poems bring tears to my eyes Begin Again. Nicely done, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! I love the picture-so precious...
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A sweet, beautiful poem for a beautiful boy. Your poems bring tears to my eyes Begin Again. Nicely done, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! I love the picture-so precious...
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Sugardog
Thank you...He had a smile that would melt anyone's heart. I appreciate the comments.
Carol
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I can see that-it is beautiful...
Comment from anabellapongasi
Oh Carol, this is precious. What a beautiful picture of your son. I see you in his smile- really his smile looks like your smile. This poem is very touching, straight from a loving mother's heart. I know you can't help but miss him. Thanks for sharing this part of you.
Love and hugs,
Anabella
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Oh Carol, this is precious. What a beautiful picture of your son. I see you in his smile- really his smile looks like your smile. This poem is very touching, straight from a loving mother's heart. I know you can't help but miss him. Thanks for sharing this part of you.
Love and hugs,
Anabella
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Anabella
I was feeling real low because another tragedy knocked at our family's door the other day and then this contest popped up. Maybe it was Micheal's way to helping his Mom. I am overwhelmed this morning by all the responses and the stars are twinkling everywhere. I truly have found a lot of friends on FanStory. Thanks you very very much. Smiling through tears of joy, Carol
Comment from eraserlynch
Awesome tribute to your son and the sentiments ooze through well chosen words complimented by a cute picture. Best of luck.
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Awesome tribute to your son and the sentiments ooze through well chosen words complimented by a cute picture. Best of luck.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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eraser
Thanks for your kind review. I truly appreciate your thoughts. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Summer Falls
His smile is beautiful and your poem is a wonderful and loving tribute to such a loving son. You chose your words well. Short poems challenge the writer to say so much with so little. Yours spoke volumes. Thank you for sharing this loving part of your life.
Summer
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His smile is beautiful and your poem is a wonderful and loving tribute to such a loving son. You chose your words well. Short poems challenge the writer to say so much with so little. Yours spoke volumes. Thank you for sharing this loving part of your life.
Summer
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Summer
I was feeling real low because another tragedy knocked at our family's door the other day and then this contest popped up. Maybe it was Micheal's way to helping his Mom. I am overwhelmed this morning by all the responses and the stars are twinkling everywhere. I truly have found a lot of friends on FanStory. Thanks you very very much.
Smiling through tears of joy, Carol
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Here's a hug from one mommy to another. :)
Comment from BJean
I know He is still a joyous memory to you. I was looking at a song yesterday that I wrote called memories, I was surprised at how suddenly and fresh were the tears, ending though in happiness for her. The last night before my daughter left, she called out three times, I love you. This is in my song. Ending in happiness for her, though. We will have a joyous reunion!!! Next week, I am going to release a story called, a Window in Heaven, from a child. It is not written for the stars or praise, but truly for folks like us. See the emotions and thoughts your poem caused:) Love Jean
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I know He is still a joyous memory to you. I was looking at a song yesterday that I wrote called memories, I was surprised at how suddenly and fresh were the tears, ending though in happiness for her. The last night before my daughter left, she called out three times, I love you. This is in my song. Ending in happiness for her, though. We will have a joyous reunion!!! Next week, I am going to release a story called, a Window in Heaven, from a child. It is not written for the stars or praise, but truly for folks like us. See the emotions and thoughts your poem caused:) Love Jean
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Jean
I was simply overwhelmed by all the responses this morning. Strange how his little smile evoked so much warmth and caring. I look forward to your story.
Smiles, CArol
Comment from honeytree
The picture is so precious and wonderful to have and share.
Your words written here will be treasured by this little boy in heaven. I am sure he will thank you so much.
Honeytree.
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The picture is so precious and wonderful to have and share.
Your words written here will be treasured by this little boy in heaven. I am sure he will thank you so much.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Honeytree
I know I was blessed when he was alive and I continue to be blessed with his love. He brought me another gift this morning with everyone's kind responses and stars.
Thank you....Carol