Comment from Hanna Marie

Exceptional

I love it!!! What a song everyone should be singing!!!
Happy is the best place to be and this little tune does that!
Good Luck Girl!!
Hanna

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Hanna Wow...I am blown away girl. I am ever so pleased that you enjoyed my little silly song. I just needed to burst out with some happiness and I am super glad you decided to come along. Thanks again and thank you for the stars.
Carol Smilin' at you :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Carol,
well I see you have a grpup of us writers here on FS having a good time rubbing and scrubing the mean ( I believe right out of the world)
what fun song lyrics and I enjoyed it very much,
Especially this part.-

Gonna wash that mean
Right down the drain
Just smiles of happiness
Shall remain

Toss away that sorrow
Replace it with some cheer

Big smile
Gert

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Gert

That was one of my favorite sections to...Actually that's how the whole song got started. Thanks for the review. Carol

reply by Gert sherwood on 25-Sep-2009

Smiles and you are welcome Carol
See you later.
Gert

Comment from gargoyle socks

Excellent

This is very cute! It was fun to read, especially since it has my name in it! You did put a smile on my face with it :-)
Karen

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Karen

I am glad that you enjoyed the poem.song. It was just something funny to make us all smile for a moment. Thanks again CArol

Comment from DrCarter2001

Excellent

Hahahah this is definitely a nice break from the sad poems, very lighthearted and fun. I really enjoyed this one. No changes needed - just fun!

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Dr Carter

I am glad that you enjoyed the fun. It was silly but a good change of pace. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from pixiemillie

Excellent

What a happy poem- -you've taken up the challenge and written a smile on our faces. I thank you for not making me scrub or rub but given me the wonderful charge of sprinkling 'fairy dust'- -at my age that's about all I can handle :+O. Love the 'girls' night out' bit- -the guys will just have to suffer.

:+), :), ;+O, {{{{{{{smile}}}}}}}} {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Pixie

You and me both...The closest I want to get to bubbles is in a glass of Asti, please. Thanks for enjoying and for the kind review. Carol

Comment from Greystrokes

Excellent

Well you cerainly managed to put a smile on this blokes face. What a wonderful light hearted witty ditty. Always a pleasure to read something a little more up lifting. Thanks for a pleasant read. Mark :)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Mark

I am so happy a guy finally said that the song was silly and uplifting. You have certainly made my day. What would life be with our at least a little silly fun.

Here's your smile and I certainly hope you will pass it on.

:) Carol Have a great day!

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

I'm sure that I'm goin to be smilin. I really need a girls night out. There's way too much testosterone around my house. Thanks for including me. Great job. Joy

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Joy

Glad you enjoyed this silly little song. We all needed a bit of cheer once and awhile. Sending you a smile and hope that you will pass it on. :) Have a great day! Carol

Comment from PoesyPoet

Excellent

Well, I'm curious to know what Shirley thought of this little ditty. I, personally, liked the upbeat, sing-song why in which it flowed and think you did a mighty fine job. PP

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Posey

She loved it! Said I'd put her name in lights and made her a star....Exactly what I set out to do....Smiles for everyone. Glad you enjoyed it too!

Sending a smile your way and hope that you will pass it on. :) Have a great day. Carol

Comment from lola29

Excellent

Carol, I love the explosions that come from your mind. This is sooo cute. It did evoke a smile and makde my day a much brighter one. You just have that Midas touch.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Lola

Thanks for putting a smile on my face and brightening my day too. Just had one reviewer tell me he didn't like the poem because it was simply silly...DUH!! And the purpose was....

Have a great day my friend. Sending you a smile and hope you pass it on. :) Carol

reply by lola29 on 25-Sep-2009

Silly is good.

Comment from tony bronk

Good

I just did not understand what the "rub rub rub and scrub scrub scrub had to do with your going out with your friends and having fun and forgetting ? I really didn't like this poem all that much. it was sort of silly. Tony

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009

Tony

Sorry that you didn't like my song lyrics and thought it was simply silly. Maybe you would have understood if you had read my author notes.

AUTHOR NOTES:
Shirley told me I had written way too many sad poems lately and that I needed to write about marshmallows, watermelon or something that was fun. This silly little poem erupted from my mind for no other purpose than to be silly. I never claim to know the rules and simple wrote for fun. I hope you get a smile on your face when you read it. Just to be on the safe side...I'm send one your way. :) Thanks

Hope the money you received was worth it to make you smile.... :) Carol