Comment from Annelisa

Excellent

This is a very lovely nonet and if you center it I think it will mirror the staircase in the artwork for an even more powerful effect!

Good luck!
Annelisa

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 Comment Written 08-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009

Annelisa You answered my prayers...I wanted to center, but didn't know if that was allowed. I've never written anything like this. There is always so many rules and such.
I changed it as soon as you suggested it and I really like it that way. Thanks so much. Carol

reply by Annelisa on 08-Aug-2009

Beautiful! I really like how it looks now!

I don't know all the rules for poetry. :) I just learn as I go along.

reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009

Thank you again...I really like how it looks too. Carol