CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Roisin
This is an absolutely perfect clarity pyramid. Your chosen words are beautiful and you've done a great job to include alliteration too in such few words. Your colours are perfect too. Great job and I wish you luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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This is an absolutely perfect clarity pyramid. Your chosen words are beautiful and you've done a great job to include alliteration too in such few words. Your colours are perfect too. Great job and I wish you luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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Roisin, I really did enjoy writing this clarity poem. My first! You know me; I can't help but try and tackle 'em all! HA! Thanks so much for your lovely review. Sue
Comment from Domino
Blimey, Sue Bo**ocks to the rules, this is SO powerful!
Every single word is a wow within the message. Metaphoric overdose of the best kind (unless it's true ta the writer)
Poetry of the highest order. Ray xx
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Blimey, Sue Bo**ocks to the rules, this is SO powerful!
Every single word is a wow within the message. Metaphoric overdose of the best kind (unless it's true ta the writer)
Poetry of the highest order. Ray xx
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
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RAY!! Poetry of the highest order?? Coming from my mentor?? I'm so "wowed", I think I'm going to go run around the block a coupla times! HA!! Yeah, I dig overdosing on metaphor, man. very cool high, dude! HA!! Thanks so much! :-)) Sue
Comment from jaeladarling
Boy, this poem could be either physical OR emotional. I love it. This is another type of poem that looks confusing to me, but from what I can tell, you've nailed. An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing!
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Boy, this poem could be either physical OR emotional. I love it. This is another type of poem that looks confusing to me, but from what I can tell, you've nailed. An enjoyable read, thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 18-Feb-2009