CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 105 "Morning Glory"A collection of poetry
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Comment from Hitcher
I loved the visuals conjured up here Sue, It has been a while but I still remember the emotions stirred up by the sight of the fresh virgin snow that has fallen during he night. Great job, good luck!
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I loved the visuals conjured up here Sue, It has been a while but I still remember the emotions stirred up by the sight of the fresh virgin snow that has fallen during he night. Great job, good luck!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from Miska
This is a beauty. Lovely words all flowing along together. The art work is perfect.
A blanket quilted, flake by flake
And all was hushed ~ a peaceful morn
A job well done. thank you. Miska
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This is a beauty. Lovely words all flowing along together. The art work is perfect.
A blanket quilted, flake by flake
And all was hushed ~ a peaceful morn
A job well done. thank you. Miska
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from adewpearl
quilted, flake by flake - I like that
drifts sculpted like mountains carved - that is a grand image to visualize
decorated like a cake with swirled icing - each verse a new image and each one so beautiful
and then the couplet is so lightheartedly joyful - I've never seen this form before, but you seem to have followed all its rules in creating this lovely portrait of a winter storm
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quilted, flake by flake - I like that
drifts sculpted like mountains carved - that is a grand image to visualize
decorated like a cake with swirled icing - each verse a new image and each one so beautiful
and then the couplet is so lightheartedly joyful - I've never seen this form before, but you seem to have followed all its rules in creating this lovely portrait of a winter storm
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from angel4
Totally enjoyed your writing. I could feel the cold, crunch of feet beneath the snow. I almost wanted to make a snowman!!! Thank you so much for writing something so wonderful.
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Totally enjoyed your writing. I could feel the cold, crunch of feet beneath the snow. I almost wanted to make a snowman!!! Thank you so much for writing something so wonderful.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from Narina Menderlin
wow. I really really liked this poem. I liked the format you used. It is presented really well. I liked how well it flowed. great work!
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wow. I really really liked this poem. I liked the format you used. It is presented really well. I liked how well it flowed. great work!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from joan marie
A wonderland until you have to shovel the driveway! LOL Lovely winter poem with a great picure. Wish I could make snow angels in it. joan marie
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A wonderland until you have to shovel the driveway! LOL Lovely winter poem with a great picure. Wish I could make snow angels in it. joan marie
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Very well done your descriptions in this poem bring your artwork to life you have done well in this form good luck I enjoyed regards Fuller
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Very well done your descriptions in this poem bring your artwork to life you have done well in this form good luck I enjoyed regards Fuller
Comment Written 10-Jan-2009
Comment from Jazh
What a lovely description of something I know absolutely nothing about! But I can clearly imagine it from your images. It all sounds so beautiful, but I guess, like our tropical storms, it can make day to day life difficult. It has lovely rhythm and flow - good luck with it. :)
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What a lovely description of something I know absolutely nothing about! But I can clearly imagine it from your images. It all sounds so beautiful, but I guess, like our tropical storms, it can make day to day life difficult. It has lovely rhythm and flow - good luck with it. :)
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Comment Written 10-Jan-2009