CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from tonyh1688
A well written poem, vulnerable and at the same time reassuring. The author has projected the urgency of her need very well. And the fact that she has in the last two lines extended an offer of solace herself emphasized her vulnerability. Good work, 6teezkid!
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A well written poem, vulnerable and at the same time reassuring. The author has projected the urgency of her need very well. And the fact that she has in the last two lines extended an offer of solace herself emphasized her vulnerability. Good work, 6teezkid!
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from yachtworknz
Nice work. Sounded good read alowd. I especially liked the ending-
For only with your touch
Am I in this calm space
And when you are in need
I'm there with my embrace
Cheers
Scott
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Nice work. Sounded good read alowd. I especially liked the ending-
For only with your touch
Am I in this calm space
And when you are in need
I'm there with my embrace
Cheers
Scott
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Aussie
Deep, deep feelings came through here. I thought that your poem was truly inspiring; everyone needs a hug sometimes. great work.
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Deep, deep feelings came through here. I thought that your poem was truly inspiring; everyone needs a hug sometimes. great work.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from Clouddancer
The need for another to say It's alrigh by silently reaching out to touch the spirit in need of solace is well defoned in this poem.
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The need for another to say It's alrigh by silently reaching out to touch the spirit in need of solace is well defoned in this poem.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2008
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
This is such a beautiful, gentle bit of writing, dear 60+,
I very much enjoy your simple and effective writing style. What a winning way with words! Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards from your 60+ too, Whizpurr-ing friend ^-^
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This is such a beautiful, gentle bit of writing, dear 60+,
I very much enjoy your simple and effective writing style. What a winning way with words! Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards from your 60+ too, Whizpurr-ing friend ^-^
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Tramore
This is a beautiful poem filled with emotion and love.
I particularily like the last verse, especially these words...
"For only with your touch
Am I in this calm space."
Well written.
Blessings.
Tramore
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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This is a beautiful poem filled with emotion and love.
I particularily like the last verse, especially these words...
"For only with your touch
Am I in this calm space."
Well written.
Blessings.
Tramore
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Thank you for this lovely and generous review. And thank you for highlighting the lines that you really like. So appreciated. With regards, Sue
Comment from sara-beth
I like your poem, and I like your notes at the end, "you must do the thing which you think you cannot do". Anyway, I think you've captured the essence of what 'solace' means, and you've kept a nice rhyming flow. Good job.
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I like your poem, and I like your notes at the end, "you must do the thing which you think you cannot do". Anyway, I think you've captured the essence of what 'solace' means, and you've kept a nice rhyming flow. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from Popcorn69
This is a very encouraging poem. In life we will all experience some hard times and there comes a life when everyone needs someone. This was very well written and organize well too. Thanks for sharing.
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This is a very encouraging poem. In life we will all experience some hard times and there comes a life when everyone needs someone. This was very well written and organize well too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
Comment from redrider6612
Beautifully done, steeped with emotions and vivid imagery. I really loved the comforting tone of this. It flowed well, great word choices. Overall, very pleasing.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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Beautifully done, steeped with emotions and vivid imagery. I really loved the comforting tone of this. It flowed well, great word choices. Overall, very pleasing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2008
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I want to thank you so much for your very generous review and very specific comments. And am so glad you enjoyed my poem! Warmest regards, Sue
Comment from ritareeact3
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, for I was about to give up on my dream, but reading your poem and the comments at the end, inspire me to keep going, even though fear is creeping in. Thanks for the message!
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words, for I was about to give up on my dream, but reading your poem and the comments at the end, inspire me to keep going, even though fear is creeping in. Thanks for the message!
Comment Written 19-Nov-2008