Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Patch and Ruby Plan a BD Party"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from lyenochka
So cute! And you managed to get Sally's Catzilla into action here. Now that would be a video to watch! Loved all the fun words you came up with like "meowgaritas" and "whisk-ey sour"! Thanks for keeping our kitties noticed here!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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So cute! And you managed to get Sally's Catzilla into action here. Now that would be a video to watch! Loved all the fun words you came up with like "meowgaritas" and "whisk-ey sour"! Thanks for keeping our kitties noticed here!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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I don't know if you read it again , but I changed it to make it flow smoother and I am glad that you were ok with what I did as it was a party and it made you look so proud of them for getting rid of the them. If I ever decided to do a real book of poems on them for kids I will get rid of the whiskey sour puss and meowgaritas. LOL. Thanks for the six star and your delightful review, my dear friend. Love and hugs! Debi
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Lol. I think that's fine. I never had either so I wouldn't know. Come to think of it, if I tried a margarita - is that like a slushy with salt on it? I think I passed out...
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Hahaha, I needed that laugh. Thank you.
Comment from Teri7
Debi, This is just too cute about Patch, Ruby and Catzilla. You used very good and cute descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. What a cute write! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Debi, This is just too cute about Patch, Ruby and Catzilla. You used very good and cute descriptive words and great imagery from the artwork you chose. What a cute write! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Hello my sweet Teri, you are absolutely a gem. Next time I need an extra cat I will ask for one of your cat's names.
Thank you so much for the most fun review and fun comments. Also thank you for the generous six stars for my silly cat poem. I put it in a book now so maybe I can keep adding to them. Thank you again, my awesome friend. Much love, and hugs, Debi
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I love when you write about Patch and the others too. It makes my heart smile! love you dear friend, but Jesus loves you so much more!!! Teri
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Hey sweetie, can you give me the name of one of your cats as I would love to use one in one of my next poems for Patch and Ruby. Ulla asked me too but I told her that you and I talked a long time ago about it and I want to make sure I do you too.
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Little Bit he is orange and white. He is so handsome and 10 years old.
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or is your prefer a female - Mocha. She is a beautiful brindle color kittie. 10 years old too. Her and Little Bit are left after Feisty
Comment from Wendy G
A fine animal story in poetry format for cat lovers, and it sounds like they will all have a lot of fun together. Will each of you be contributing poems?
Very cute. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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A fine animal story in poetry format for cat lovers, and it sounds like they will all have a lot of fun together. Will each of you be contributing poems?
Very cute. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Wendy, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Ha, ha, ha, you should add my kids to your Patch aka batch:) Teddy and Mary extraordinary:) Loved this: "ome meowgaritas, one cat brought
And then a whisk-ey sour Puss fought
So, Patch said, "Cats with alcohol"
"Catzilla, get rid of them all!!"
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Ha, ha, ha, you should add my kids to your Patch aka batch:) Teddy and Mary extraordinary:) Loved this: "ome meowgaritas, one cat brought
And then a whisk-ey sour Puss fought
So, Patch said, "Cats with alcohol"
"Catzilla, get rid of them all!!"
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Iza, you are absolutely a gem. Thank you so much for the most fun review and fun comments. Also thank you for the generous six stars for my silly cat poem. I put it in a book now so maybe I can keep adding to them. Thank you again, my awesome friend. Much love, and hugs, Debi
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh my gosh, the silly kitties get together and a little midnight fun!! It's so cute how you built your fun poem using cats from FanStory members and your granddaughter. They were just up to a bit of fun until Sally's cat busted up the drinking, lol. Then Helen, wise to it all, taped all their antics.
Loved it, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Oh my gosh, the silly kitties get together and a little midnight fun!! It's so cute how you built your fun poem using cats from FanStory members and your granddaughter. They were just up to a bit of fun until Sally's cat busted up the drinking, lol. Then Helen, wise to it all, taped all their antics.
Loved it, my friend,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
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Dearest Rhonda, you are absolutely a gem. Thank you so much for the most fun review and fun comments. Also thank you for the generous six stars for my silly cat poem. I put it in a book now so maybe I can keep adding to them. Thank you again, my awesome friend. Much love, and hugs, Debi
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Much love and many hugs back!!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
How precious! A kitty birthday party! Look at all those cat puns. I think you've been hanging around me too long! LOL Just kidding. The whole thing was PURRfect!
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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How precious! A kitty birthday party! Look at all those cat puns. I think you've been hanging around me too long! LOL Just kidding. The whole thing was PURRfect!
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Marilyn, so sorry it takes me so long to get back to you. I am like a hundred behind. Then I just keep adding to the deficit. Haha.
I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I suppose I should take the alcohol out then. LOL.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi
Comment from Kahlani
Hi Debi, I thoroughly enjoyed this fun and light-hearted poem. I love the posts that put a smile on my face and your poem did exactly that. I wish you all the best.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi Debi, I thoroughly enjoyed this fun and light-hearted poem. I love the posts that put a smile on my face and your poem did exactly that. I wish you all the best.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
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Hi there Kahlani, I'm so glad that you had fun with me and my silly cats poem. They are so much fun to write and I am hoping some day to do a real book with them. However, I suppose I should take the alcohol out then. LOL.
Thanks for all your kind comments for this one. Love, Debi