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In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne

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Comment from Patrick Bernardy
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Hey Debi!

I assume this is another one of your touching tribute poems to one of our members. I don't have much to say other than I find these rewarding to read, as it gives me some sense of the history of this community. When I clicked "Read This," I had no idea who Nomi was. Now I know much about this member. Thanks again for being so generous with your skill; those who have lost can never have enough support from friends.

Patrick

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Hi Patrick. I hope you are enjoying it here. I have to get over to see your work, but this last week they have had me pretty busy. Actually Nomi is a very good friend here of mine so I guess I did it partly out of friendship.

    But thank you for such a sweet message for Nomi, as he goes through this very hard time right now. I appreciate your words of friendship for both of us. Much love, Debi
Comment from way2gokevs
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Beautifully written with words that portray a sense of loss and love. Not to keen on the big space before the picture but very much like your verse, says so much in so few words. cheers Kev

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Hi there. If you are still there, will you please look again and tell me if you still see a space? That just happened during editing. Thank you
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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This is beautiful, Debi, and so elegantly written that it is as if the quill and pen had skillfully written this poem. I am touched by the heartwarming verses and the clever rhymes to top it off. This gently speaks of love kisses and butterflies landing on the shoulders of our dear friend, Nomi. This serves as warm a comfy tribute to his dearly departed wife.
Jesse


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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Dearest Jesse, I thank you for such a sweet message for Nomi, as he goes through this very hard time right now. I truly appreciate your kind words for my poem for him and of friendship for both of us. Much love, Debi
reply by Jesse James Doty on 08-Sep-2024
    Your poem was a kind gesture for Nomi and his wife who just passed away.
    You have a big heart.
    Jesse
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Jesse. That means a lot to me.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Thank you for writing this for Nomi. Our prayers are with him through this difficult time. 51 years married is such a time for celebration and we will be here to remind him of that and to hold him up through this incredible loss. Blessings





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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Hi again Marilyn, and thank you for such a sweet message for Nomi, as he goes through this very hard time right now. I appreciate your words of friendship for both of us. Much love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
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Yes, we are praying for Nomi! Thank you for writing this for him. I emailed him but haven't heard back. I guess he'll be very busy for a while. I was sure he said he was married in 1971 - that's what the bio says so I thought they were married 53 years. Such a big shock!

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Hi Helen, this was important for me to get out before I go to bed. I kept checking to see if he answered any of the places I sent to him. And he just told me today that they had just celebrated 51 years two days before she died. So very sad. I would imagine he was with family today.
    If I hear from him I will contact you, although if he get's mine he will get yours too. Thanks for the kind words and for the six star. I just hoped to make people aware so he will feel the love and prayers. Thanks again, sweetie.
    Love, Debi
reply by lyenochka on 08-Sep-2024
    Thank you for doing this even with all you are going through. Keep me posted on you and the latest doctor visits! 💖💞🙏
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
    Well the iPad is the only place that I can help my vision along. It is amazing how the dusty film is blocking my vision but when I open it up on my iPad I can read though the blur. UGH, it is not fun. Thanks so much for the prayers. After a four hour nap this evening I am almost ready to go to bed again. Love ya.