Haunted By A Memory
A tragic tale of the loss of a friend45 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
NOMI, this is such a well written poem about the effects of smoking. I smoked heavily (cigars and pipes) when I was working in advertising and marketing and when smoking was in vogue. I have now quit for over 35 years and am so glad I did.
On another front, I like: I am haunted by a memory. "Haunting" works well with the topic of your loss. It is such a good reminder.
Well done, NOMI. Perhaps, a little bit of insanity is necessary to remind you of the perils of smoking.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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NOMI, this is such a well written poem about the effects of smoking. I smoked heavily (cigars and pipes) when I was working in advertising and marketing and when smoking was in vogue. I have now quit for over 35 years and am so glad I did.
On another front, I like: I am haunted by a memory. "Haunting" works well with the topic of your loss. It is such a good reminder.
Well done, NOMI. Perhaps, a little bit of insanity is necessary to remind you of the perils of smoking.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review and also congratulations on defeating the monster of tobacco addiction.
Comment from June Sargent
Hindsight is always crystal clear. The choices made years ago can have deep impact on the rest of our lives. You lost a friend who lost her life. Hopefully people can still learn from the mistakes of others. Much food for thought here
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Hindsight is always crystal clear. The choices made years ago can have deep impact on the rest of our lives. You lost a friend who lost her life. Hopefully people can still learn from the mistakes of others. Much food for thought here
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you, your comments and thoughts are appreciated.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a compelling poem full of emotion and sorrow. The way the last line turns into a refrain at the end gives the impression of a haunting presence. Thanks for sharing the backstory and the warning. I'm sorry for your loss.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This is a compelling poem full of emotion and sorrow. The way the last line turns into a refrain at the end gives the impression of a haunting presence. Thanks for sharing the backstory and the warning. I'm sorry for your loss.
Mintybee
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oy. This is poignant and spot on in every way, Nomi. I cannot imagine what my life will be should the day ever come when my BFF passes. Thankfully, she is not a smoker, but you made it so painfully clear with this winsome poem, how that complicates everything and cuts into the time that she IS still alive. The lack of "quality of life" exacts quite the toll on BOTH friends, and that is tragic. It's always hard to be the one who isn't suffering from the actual physical affliction, but, instead, has to watch its effect on someone you love.
You've done a masterful job here. Very heart-wrenching. xoxo
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Oy. This is poignant and spot on in every way, Nomi. I cannot imagine what my life will be should the day ever come when my BFF passes. Thankfully, she is not a smoker, but you made it so painfully clear with this winsome poem, how that complicates everything and cuts into the time that she IS still alive. The lack of "quality of life" exacts quite the toll on BOTH friends, and that is tragic. It's always hard to be the one who isn't suffering from the actual physical affliction, but, instead, has to watch its effect on someone you love.
You've done a masterful job here. Very heart-wrenching. xoxo
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you, your words are powerful and I truly appreciate your thoughts.
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I respect and adore you so much, Nomi. You're such a class act. Xo
Comment from jenintorre
I just had to give you six stars for this poem as not only is it so well written I can so relate to it as I also lost my best friend to cancer. I still miss her and think about her although it has been several years now. Blessings. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I just had to give you six stars for this poem as not only is it so well written I can so relate to it as I also lost my best friend to cancer. I still miss her and think about her although it has been several years now. Blessings. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you Jen, and I am so sorry for your loss, no matter how long it has been.