Another Wild Night
Youth getting wild.64 total reviews
Comment from Colorado Owl
This brings back memories of being young, having fun, and being somewhat careless/carefree. Seems like ages ago...it WAS ages ago!
Thank you for your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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This brings back memories of being young, having fun, and being somewhat careless/carefree. Seems like ages ago...it WAS ages ago!
Thank you for your poem.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Well, Colorado Owl it was written in the late 70's and just presented. So, we have all been here once. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from 3rd Sight.
A poem that reads like a story, not bad. It's easy to follow, but the rhyme scheme needs a little work; that's the only thing, that stopped me from giving you five stars.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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A poem that reads like a story, not bad. It's easy to follow, but the rhyme scheme needs a little work; that's the only thing, that stopped me from giving you five stars.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you 3rd Sight. We can't win them all. But I really appreciate your review!
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You're welcome: And good luck, with your writing in the future
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Well, thank you so much!
Comment from bob cullen
To me, this sounds more like a song than a poem. It also brings back memories of my teenage weekends more than fifty years ago when we'd go to the Oceanic Hotel at Coogee. I just hope you have more luck with the ladies than I had all those years back then. This poem revived great memories. Conversely, it told of many rejections.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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To me, this sounds more like a song than a poem. It also brings back memories of my teenage weekends more than fifty years ago when we'd go to the Oceanic Hotel at Coogee. I just hope you have more luck with the ladies than I had all those years back then. This poem revived great memories. Conversely, it told of many rejections.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Bob. This was written in the late 70's and just recently presented. So, we have all been there. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Harry,
You write about a better time than I had on my drinking/disco days. I frequented a local disco; I drank a few drinks and got drunk. (I was a lightweight drinker then). My loyal girlfriends always made sure I got home ok.
Your poem is light, humorous, and romantic--unlike my disco days. There's nothing good about waking up with a splitting headache in the morning, wondering who trashed my bedroom (it was me!)
Thanks for your memories, Harry.
You've written an excellent poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Harry,
You write about a better time than I had on my drinking/disco days. I frequented a local disco; I drank a few drinks and got drunk. (I was a lightweight drinker then). My loyal girlfriends always made sure I got home ok.
Your poem is light, humorous, and romantic--unlike my disco days. There's nothing good about waking up with a splitting headache in the morning, wondering who trashed my bedroom (it was me!)
Thanks for your memories, Harry.
You've written an excellent poem.
Best wishes,
Cindy
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Cindy. This was actually written in the late 70's, my disco days and just recently presented. I think we have all been there once. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Nicki.B
I really enjoyed this take of a Saturday night out on the town, enjoying few social drinks and looking forward to getting lucky haha!
A fu, lighthearted, sort of cheeky little poem.
Well done
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I really enjoyed this take of a Saturday night out on the town, enjoying few social drinks and looking forward to getting lucky haha!
A fu, lighthearted, sort of cheeky little poem.
Well done
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Nicki B. Yes, it was written in the late 70's and just recently presented. I think we have all been there once. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from royowen
I can remember when I went to my first disco, man, was it loud, but there was good times when I was young, the bends were in plentiful, as a matter of fact I was a frontman for one of them, this brings back some happy memories of times gone by, beautifully written Harry, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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I can remember when I went to my first disco, man, was it loud, but there was good times when I was young, the bends were in plentiful, as a matter of fact I was a frontman for one of them, this brings back some happy memories of times gone by, beautifully written Harry, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Roy. This was written in the late 70's my disco days. I think we have all been there. Thank you for your review Roy. I really appreciate that!
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Well done
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LOL! Thank you Roy!
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Welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Harry.
This poem sounds like a college party. Is this a one-night stand beginning to happen. I hope the drinks to cause you to do something they will regret later.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the weekend
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Hi Harry.
This poem sounds like a college party. Is this a one-night stand beginning to happen. I hope the drinks to cause you to do something they will regret later.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the weekend
Joan
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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LOL!. Well, Joan. This was written in the late 70's - my disco days and just recently presented. I know we have all been there once. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that.
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Yes I was a disco fanatic when it was popular.
You're welcome Harry.
Joan
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Oh, weren't we all?
Comment from QC Poet
Saturday nights out with that special girl were fun and one did know why or should know why they were there youthful days are fun and can vw costly if not careful
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Saturday nights out with that special girl were fun and one did know why or should know why they were there youthful days are fun and can vw costly if not careful
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Lol! Yes, that is very true. But when youth is involved - you are going to live forever. Nothing matters and what if it did attitude. Right?
Comment from TPAC
You're feelin' pretty good
cause you ain't got no pain
You're sittin' there
watching the band
The music is so loud
you can't even think
You ask the waitress
for another drink
she looks at you
with that sexy wink
she's gonna love you tonight
you can see that glow
but you ain't worried
she takes you by the arm
And so on, these probable suggestions for this particular read. Hoping at least one viewpoint might assist overall presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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You're feelin' pretty good
cause you ain't got no pain
You're sittin' there
watching the band
The music is so loud
you can't even think
You ask the waitress
for another drink
she looks at you
with that sexy wink
she's gonna love you tonight
you can see that glow
but you ain't worried
she takes you by the arm
And so on, these probable suggestions for this particular read. Hoping at least one viewpoint might assist overall presentation.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Ulla
Oh I remember it well and it was such great fun. We partied into the small hours and no-one came to any harm. But then again, it was Denmark and a sense of laissez- faire which still exists to this day. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Oh I remember it well and it was such great fun. We partied into the small hours and no-one came to any harm. But then again, it was Denmark and a sense of laissez- faire which still exists to this day. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, that does sound like fun! Thank your for your review. I really appreciate it!