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Comment from Sallyo
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It's got me in a state, why would anyone debate the syllables of words that seem so obvious to me. Well, gee!
I don't know Tom, but I get a pleasing picture of him from your verses, even though the thought of Alaska makes me cringe a bit. Tasmania's cold enough for me!

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 Comment Written 03-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    You got me Sallyo, but I finally got so tired of people telling me that family has two syllables and retired has three syllables that I thought I would write them down.
    Anyway, yes, I appreciate your great review of the poem for TB Botts and I know he will too. Thanks my dear friend. Love, Debi
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
    You got me Sallyo, but I finally got so tired of people telling me that family has two syllables and retired has three syllables that I thought I would write them down.
    Anyway, yes, I appreciate your great review of the poem for TB Botts and I know he will too. Thanks my dear friend. Love, Debi