The beauty of Spring.
Beauty is all around us.47 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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This is a very beautiful and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review. Much appreciated.
Comment from teafor2
Baltimore Born, this combination of picture and compressed verbiage gives
reader(s) a stunning straight forward metaphoric imagery laden vision of
a moment to last forever or as long as the picture is on loan from FanArt-
Review. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Baltimore Born, this combination of picture and compressed verbiage gives
reader(s) a stunning straight forward metaphoric imagery laden vision of
a moment to last forever or as long as the picture is on loan from FanArt-
Review. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Helvi2
Hi Baltimore Born, I think this is the way we all feel about Spring! Once the warm weather and flowers bloom we are captivated by it! I know the serenity and joy I feel when Spring comes 'round! Love your description! Your poem was very nicely written! Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Hi Baltimore Born, I think this is the way we all feel about Spring! Once the warm weather and flowers bloom we are captivated by it! I know the serenity and joy I feel when Spring comes 'round! Love your description! Your poem was very nicely written! Good Luck in the Contest! :o) Helvi
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Yes, I love Spring too. Thank you for your wonderful comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Saki the Artist
Lovely poem. It is elegant and pretty. However, I think it's important that you mention Spring/Nature in the body of the poem itself (not just in the title).
Excellent choice of artwork.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Lovely poem. It is elegant and pretty. However, I think it's important that you mention Spring/Nature in the body of the poem itself (not just in the title).
Excellent choice of artwork.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Ulla
Oh that is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem, which such a lovely imagery. I love the short poems. They are not easy to write, at all. All the best of luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Oh that is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem, which such a lovely imagery. I love the short poems. They are not easy to write, at all. All the best of luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from royowen
What a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, I think nature is about to explode in all her loveliness in the northern hemisphere very shortly as spring approaches, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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What a great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest, I think nature is about to explode in all her loveliness in the northern hemisphere very shortly as spring approaches, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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Comment from jessizero
You got the syllable count right, and you chose your words well. I lke how you personified beauty. The picture you supplied suited the poem wonderfully. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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You got the syllable count right, and you chose your words well. I lke how you personified beauty. The picture you supplied suited the poem wonderfully. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
