Comment from lancellot

Excellent

A good limerick, I think the joke is on the mother. I doubt Roy or his brother are the type of men who will stick around and care for a family or a wife (especially since none of the three are worthwhile people.)

Good work.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024

Well said, thanks so much!

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Well, well , well that is just nasty and sexy. Ha! What a great little limerick.

This may do well. Good luck in the Limerick competition. Good fun!
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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024

Haha, thanks so much, Douglas!
Xo

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

This morning I was feeling down in the dumps but after reading this I couldn't stop smiling. You've delivered the remedy to my depressed state. Thank you. And it was much cheaper than medication.
I hope you continue to maintain this vein of light-hearted writing. It is most enjoyable.

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 Comment Written 28-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024

Bob! You crack me up!! Haha, thanks so much!
Xo