Willing Hearts
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Comment from Sankey
I am settling into this very dramatic and probably realistic in some cases for real. I wonder how much of this sort of thing goes on in Australia and worldwide, I guess. Well done. Just 2 things to look at.
Matter-a-fact, Should this be "As a matter of fact"??
"I don't have (a)choice, do I?"
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I am settling into this very dramatic and probably realistic in some cases for real. I wonder how much of this sort of thing goes on in Australia and worldwide, I guess. Well done. Just 2 things to look at.
Matter-a-fact, Should this be "As a matter of fact"??
"I don't have (a)choice, do I?"
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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I have added the missing 'a'. You're right about matter of fact, in my manuscript it's correct, here it has the hyphens. I get tired of people telling me to add them. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Barbara, your detailed descriptions are something I attempt to emulate. You are consistently able to weave an interesting and relatable story, full of authentic sounding dialogue. You have a real gift!
Enjoy the rest of your week!
Alexandra:).x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Barbara, your detailed descriptions are something I attempt to emulate. You are consistently able to weave an interesting and relatable story, full of authentic sounding dialogue. You have a real gift!
Enjoy the rest of your week!
Alexandra:).x
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement!!!!!