Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

I think there is a deeper meaning to this 10 word poem than immediately meets the eye.
Excellent artwork to add to the possibilities.

Blessings
Janet

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 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

There are certainly a few ways to interpret this poem, Janet. But I would bet that you read it exactly as it was intended. Thank you. - Jamison

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Your poem is a very well done display of the cost of power. Having all the money in the world and nothing inside, eternally devastating. Fantastic picture to go along with it. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! Julie

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 Comment Written 15-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thanks, Julie. I appreciate this great review. Power and the pursuit of it has led to the ruination of many. Thankfully, that won't be you or me. Take care. - Jamison