The Makeover
A WITSEC Dribble Flash45 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, Okay, you got me on that one. This is an outstanding entry for this dribble contest.I think it could well. I do think you have offered a new way for the government to take care of us when necessary. Terry.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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LOL, Okay, you got me on that one. This is an outstanding entry for this dribble contest.I think it could well. I do think you have offered a new way for the government to take care of us when necessary. Terry.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Terry, much appreciated.
Great review.
John
Comment from LJbutterfly
It took me a minute to figure this out. Maybe because I don't know what WITSEC means, When I got to the end, I wondered, "Why would she want to stand to pee?" At second read I said, "OOOOH!" Great story with a witty, surprising ending. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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It took me a minute to figure this out. Maybe because I don't know what WITSEC means, When I got to the end, I wondered, "Why would she want to stand to pee?" At second read I said, "OOOOH!" Great story with a witty, surprising ending. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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WITSEC, witness protection program if you haven?t looked it up yet.
This is a great review. I appreciate it very much!
John
Comment from JT traveller
Very good. A love a humorous conclusion. You must be in fine form today, good to see.
Laughter truly is the best medicine. I thoroughly enjoyed your short story. Jacqueline
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Very good. A love a humorous conclusion. You must be in fine form today, good to see.
Laughter truly is the best medicine. I thoroughly enjoyed your short story. Jacqueline
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Hi Jacqueline.
Thank you for this great review!
Cheers,
John
Comment from Michele Harber
I planned to enter this contest, but now I'm not so sure, because I'd bet money I just read the winning entry! The ending caught me 100% off guard, and made me catch my breath and laugh out loud. Excellent job, and I truly do believe you'll win. Perfectly written story with a wonderful twist ending, and backed by a phenomenal sense of humor.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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I planned to enter this contest, but now I'm not so sure, because I'd bet money I just read the winning entry! The ending caught me 100% off guard, and made me catch my breath and laugh out loud. Excellent job, and I truly do believe you'll win. Perfectly written story with a wonderful twist ending, and backed by a phenomenal sense of humor.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Oh, Michelle! I love you! What a great review! Thank you sooooooo much,
Cheers,
John
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I truly loved your story. As anyone who knows me knows, I don't give out sixes easily. I'd have given this a 10 if I had the option. I love a twist ending, and I try to use them in my own flash fictions, but I've never seen one that beat this one. Whether I enter or not, I hope you win. I can't see how you won't.
Comment from royowen
I guess this protagonist is going through transition, as they seem to be teaching our teachers to do that with some of our kids. Beautifully written John, you've got a good entry in this flash fiction contest, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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I guess this protagonist is going through transition, as they seem to be teaching our teachers to do that with some of our kids. Beautifully written John, you've got a good entry in this flash fiction contest, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much, Roy.
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Most welcome John.