Dazzling darkness
A free Verse Poem44 total reviews
Comment from Daylily
Beautifully said...and, because we are made in God's image, we are clearly able to respond to the magnificence of His creation. A clear night sky, while standing far away from city lights, is truly a wonder to behold. Oceans, rivers, waterfalls, and streams can emotionally touch our hearts, as well. I enjoyed your posting very much. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Beautifully said...and, because we are made in God's image, we are clearly able to respond to the magnificence of His creation. A clear night sky, while standing far away from city lights, is truly a wonder to behold. Oceans, rivers, waterfalls, and streams can emotionally touch our hearts, as well. I enjoyed your posting very much. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Daylily, thank you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
"However, as I write these words, my mind lies dormant, and I sit,
still awash in a sea of dark indigo darkness." I am pretty sure your mind is dormant. I would say it's far from it to be able to write this wonderful poem. Your descriptions are great. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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"However, as I write these words, my mind lies dormant, and I sit,
still awash in a sea of dark indigo darkness." I am pretty sure your mind is dormant. I would say it's far from it to be able to write this wonderful poem. Your descriptions are great. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Barbara, thank you for your supportive words.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
"My sight is awash In a sea of deep indigo darkness"
WOW!
You are amazingly talented. This is such a core of the department. You have taken to the gorgeous night sky and created a lovely Palm to go with it. The way you see this and how you phrase it. And your word choices all have created a beautiful piece of magic. I adore this there's only one thing for it. Have the best of days!
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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"My sight is awash In a sea of deep indigo darkness"
WOW!
You are amazingly talented. This is such a core of the department. You have taken to the gorgeous night sky and created a lovely Palm to go with it. The way you see this and how you phrase it. And your word choices all have created a beautiful piece of magic. I adore this there's only one thing for it. Have the best of days!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Lea, I am humbled by your enthusiasm and six stars. Thank you. 🙏
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful representation of the the darkness of night. Your well chosen words take the reader on a night time adventure to discover the light of the Holiest of holies. I enjoyed it very much. (One suggestion: Since all the rest is in present tense, I continue . . . am conscious . . . there is a whisper.
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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This is a beautiful representation of the the darkness of night. Your well chosen words take the reader on a night time adventure to discover the light of the Holiest of holies. I enjoyed it very much. (One suggestion: Since all the rest is in present tense, I continue . . . am conscious . . . there is a whisper.
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Comment Written 11-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2023
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Verna, thank you, as always you see with the eyes of the heart and share your positive thoughts.