Just a Small Sip
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Comment from karenina
You know I've never tried that? I think I might now that I've read all the fun and fuzzy feelings you had! Do you have ADULT church picnics? Sign me up, please! I never leave a church picnic without some child's cotton candy in my hair and a stray balloon ribbon stuck to my foot! I want BOTH kinds of spirits! LOL... Great poem. Made me laugh!
Karenina
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023
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You know I've never tried that? I think I might now that I've read all the fun and fuzzy feelings you had! Do you have ADULT church picnics? Sign me up, please! I never leave a church picnic without some child's cotton candy in my hair and a stray balloon ribbon stuck to my foot! I want BOTH kinds of spirits! LOL... Great poem. Made me laugh!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2023
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My Of course there are adult meetings and classes at our church, where they have luncheons after, with potlucks. Besides if t hadn't added the adult part someone would chasten me for writing about a church picnic with children around. So I had to have one call me out about an adult picnic at church, LOL.. Just kidding! Thanks for having some fun with me on this, my friend. But good luck finding an adult one where the lemonade is spiked. LOL
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OH geez. I really was just having fun with you! I wasn't "calling you out"--I was hoping for an invite!
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my indeed! Spiked lemonade is common but I suspect that the church would not appreciate such antics.
Wait...didn't Jesus spike the water at a wedding? I think it was his first miracle. Ha!
Funny write-up.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Oh my indeed! Spiked lemonade is common but I suspect that the church would not appreciate such antics.
Wait...didn't Jesus spike the water at a wedding? I think it was his first miracle. Ha!
Funny write-up.
D
Comment Written 05-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Hi Douglas! Thanks so much for reading this silly spiked punch poem. Sometimes it is fun to do crazy and silly ones to steer away from those serious ones all the time.
Thanks for your awesome comments and having a little fun with me.
Comment from L. Kalere
I'm happy to say that I've shared a hard lemonade or two (Lynchburg Lemonade), and recognize your reaction. This was light, airy, fun, and well written. The photo and colors complemented the festive mood.
Linda
That's quite a church picnic!
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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I'm happy to say that I've shared a hard lemonade or two (Lynchburg Lemonade), and recognize your reaction. This was light, airy, fun, and well written. The photo and colors complemented the festive mood.
Linda
That's quite a church picnic!
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Thanks so much for reading this silly spiked punch poem. Sometimes it is fun to do crazy and silly ones to steer away from those serious ones all the time.
Thanks for your awesome comments and having a little fun with me.
Comment from Claire Tennant
Gee, I would have liked to be at that party. Your witty tale in the format chosen conveyed the spike you (supposedly) felt. I loved it All the best with your entry
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Gee, I would have liked to be at that party. Your witty tale in the format chosen conveyed the spike you (supposedly) felt. I loved it All the best with your entry
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2023
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Hi Claire! Thanks so much for reading this silly spiked punch poem. Sometimes it is fun to do crazy and silly ones to steer away from those serious ones all the time.
Thanks for your awesome comments and having a little fun with me.