Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

There are some women on FS who do seem to will a lot of the contests so now you have me guessing! Since the speaker is talking to God perhaps you should capitalize 'you're' in the following phrase: ... 'you're why she has been winning all those struggles. ' Just a thought.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Shari, thank you for the edits. Terry.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Terry, what a lovely and kind prayer! I love the way you have expressed this so genuinely and discreetly. I wish her, too, all the very best and thank you for sharing this. Debbie x

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Thanks, Debbie.

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Terry, what a heartfelt prayer. I will pray with you on this. Whoever it is, I'm guessing I know her, too, though I'm not sure which one. My heart and prayers go out to her. While I'm at it, I'll pray for the soreheads as well.

Thanks for sharing your prayer!

Hugs and prayers for the intended recipient.
Rhonda

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 Comment Written 16-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2023

Rhonda, I love the part about the soreheads! Thank you, Terry.

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 16-Sep-2023

Always!