Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Patch and Ruby's Plan "Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
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Comment from lyenochka
That's so funny and cute!
I laughed at:
Patch wears the pants in Helen's house, but Ruby wears a dress
I hope Kenzie finds her ring! Those naughty kitties plotting over zoom! ð??¸
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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That's so funny and cute!
I laughed at:
Patch wears the pants in Helen's house, but Ruby wears a dress
I hope Kenzie finds her ring! Those naughty kitties plotting over zoom! ð??¸
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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LOL, thank you Helen. I was in a silly mood today and you inspired me so much, after Kenzie told me that she is moving and Ruby is sensing the tension and acting weird. I started laughing and told her about Patch and your hilarious stories. So even tho Kenz is not a missus, she does have lots of rings as her boyfriend is a jeweler. She will think the poem is great.
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Thank you for remembering all of us, especially Patch. She wishes Ruby the best in the move ❤️🙏
Comment from LisaMay
Writing a poem with 14-syllable lines is quite a challenge, but you have handled it well to provide this story-in-a-poem of 2 plotting cats. As a cat lover myself, I know what mischief mine gets up to, but when 2 combine to act like sly fox, of course there will be trouble! My cat keeps hiding things in my slippers, thank goodness not in the litter box (yet).
Correction in this line:
Now that the two are zooming, both the kitty's are good friends
(In this context it is 'kitties' - being plural and not possessive.)
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Writing a poem with 14-syllable lines is quite a challenge, but you have handled it well to provide this story-in-a-poem of 2 plotting cats. As a cat lover myself, I know what mischief mine gets up to, but when 2 combine to act like sly fox, of course there will be trouble! My cat keeps hiding things in my slippers, thank goodness not in the litter box (yet).
Correction in this line:
Now that the two are zooming, both the kitty's are good friends
(In this context it is 'kitties' - being plural and not possessive.)
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2023
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Aha, thank you so much. Actually when I read it earlier, I caught that and then went in to edit and caught something else and forgot that. So you are a sweetheart. I am so glad you told me.
Have you read the stories that Helen posts about Patch? I have loved her stories about how Patch was taking their move so now when Ruby has to go, I thought I would jump on the band wagon. Ruby belongs to my granddaughter, Kenzie who does most of my art. It was fun to do and I thank you again for the fun review and comments and your awesome feedback.
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I've read some of Helen's Patch stories and enjoyed them.
I hope the move goes well for Ruby - change can be upsetting for everyone.
I like hearing from the animal's POV, such as Wendy G's dog Sunny also.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Patch and Ruby's Plan, presented in four AADD-rhymed quatrains, shows that those cats are not to be trusted. Now I already know this about cats, but others learn like this. : )
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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This poem, Patch and Ruby's Plan, presented in four AADD-rhymed quatrains, shows that those cats are not to be trusted. Now I already know this about cats, but others learn like this. : )
Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Hey Bill! I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww! Poor Patch on the move. But maybe they can hatch a plan to delay or stop this because they're obviously a pair of very smart felines! Thanks for sharing, Debi. Debbie
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Aww! Poor Patch on the move. But maybe they can hatch a plan to delay or stop this because they're obviously a pair of very smart felines! Thanks for sharing, Debi. Debbie
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Hi Debbie, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.
Comment from JSD
Wow! Those cats sound fairly mischievous! A lovely, funny poem which conveys their relationship perfectly, although I worry that they're taking over. Thanks for sharing this!
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Wow! Those cats sound fairly mischievous! A lovely, funny poem which conveys their relationship perfectly, although I worry that they're taking over. Thanks for sharing this!
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2023
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Hi John, I thank you so much for this kind review and comments for my Patch and Ruby poem.
After Kenzie said they were moving and Ruby was acting strange, I needed to have a little laugh. I appreciate your very kind comments for it and for having a little fun with me.
Thank you again, my dear friend.