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An unfortunate late night occurrence

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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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A good possibility to happen. I see a kid still young enough to be frightened by the thunder and lightning but then old enough to be embarrassed by messing in his pajamas.
A clever and a good 100-word story for the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
    Thank you Mary. So many of my posts are serious, I just want to have some fun sometimes.
reply by Mary Vigasin on 24-Aug-2023
    And you did with this story
Comment from BethShelby
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Poor kid. That must have been terrifying. I don't think I want to get into a shower while that was going on, but then again desparate times call for desparate measures.

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 Comment Written 24-Aug-2023


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2023
    Absolutely. If it happened to me, I would want to get clean as soon as possible. Thank you for your review comments.