Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Until You ~ I Never Knew"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Janel Mock
I enjoyed reading this poem! I am not very good at rhyming my thoughts and I admire this piece very much! Thank you for sharing this with us! Look forward to reading more! ~Janel
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I enjoyed reading this poem! I am not very good at rhyming my thoughts and I admire this piece very much! Thank you for sharing this with us! Look forward to reading more! ~Janel
Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Oh my we're truly lovely pulling you have written pull that in heart strings completely beautiful. You're rhyming is great. I love the color scheme you have in the picture all like a lovely package.
Your fourth stanza strikes a chord with me as it reflects so that is my favorite part of your poem. I appreciate your writing ability and what you have produced. Is really great. Not seeing no problems with grammar and it's aesthetically pleasing. I thank you for your submission I hope you have a great night!
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Oh my we're truly lovely pulling you have written pull that in heart strings completely beautiful. You're rhyming is great. I love the color scheme you have in the picture all like a lovely package.
Your fourth stanza strikes a chord with me as it reflects so that is my favorite part of your poem. I appreciate your writing ability and what you have produced. Is really great. Not seeing no problems with grammar and it's aesthetically pleasing. I thank you for your submission I hope you have a great night!
Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Okay. I see what you did there. We all thought you were speaking about a man and boom it was the good Lord almighty.
Interesting play for this contest with an unexpected turn.
Nice work.
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Okay. I see what you did there. We all thought you were speaking about a man and boom it was the good Lord almighty.
Interesting play for this contest with an unexpected turn.
Nice work.
D
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Comment Written 06-May-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A good, well structured, flowing and rhyming verse. The verse evolves as a testament to the writer's deeply held faith and perfectly fulfils the theme of this contest. Good luck! Debbie
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A good, well structured, flowing and rhyming verse. The verse evolves as a testament to the writer's deeply held faith and perfectly fulfils the theme of this contest. Good luck! Debbie
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Comment Written 06-May-2023