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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a happy and fun poem, Mystery Author. I loved
the dancing bear. It just exudes happiness. Your poem
was well-presented in rhyme, meter, and message. You
described what made you happy and woe be to anyone
who crosses that line. Watch our for Mama Bear. Yes,
being happy is a choice, but their is a limit. Hopefully, that
limit won't last long. The video was fun and upbeat and
perfect, too.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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What a happy and fun poem, Mystery Author. I loved
the dancing bear. It just exudes happiness. Your poem
was well-presented in rhyme, meter, and message. You
described what made you happy and woe be to anyone
who crosses that line. Watch our for Mama Bear. Yes,
being happy is a choice, but their is a limit. Hopefully, that
limit won't last long. The video was fun and upbeat and
perfect, too.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Hi Jan, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. You know I am a mama & grandma bear, which are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs! And thanks sweetie for the six stars
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, the bear is a real hoot! A mama bear who is happy is the perfect image for this fun poem. When a poet says, "I'm glad this stanza is about to stop." This is a poet I can appreciate. Very well done for this contest. Terry.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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LOL, the bear is a real hoot! A mama bear who is happy is the perfect image for this fun poem. When a poet says, "I'm glad this stanza is about to stop." This is a poet I can appreciate. Very well done for this contest. Terry.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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As a mostly happy mama bear, let me say that you almost sound like my son who I kinda quoted when I get a little over nostalgic (sappy) he will say ok mom, you can stop now. Thanks for the awesome review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
That is a really good happy poem. I'm glad you stuck to the bear facts in this one. I probably could not bear it, otherwise. I think some people would have been overbearing, but not you. I bearly got through this poem without smiling.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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That is a really good happy poem. I'm glad you stuck to the bear facts in this one. I probably could not bear it, otherwise. I think some people would have been overbearing, but not you. I bearly got through this poem without smiling.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Haha! Good one Paul! Sounds like you ate your bearies w breakfast this morning which will keep you beary happy and healthy! Thanks for the awesireview dear friend
Comment from Heather Knight
This is gorgeous and it made me smile. We do need more happiness in the world nowadays.
Your GIF is very well chosen as are your words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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This is gorgeous and it made me smile. We do need more happiness in the world nowadays.
Your GIF is very well chosen as are your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Heather, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading so much. I have a happy dance myself that I'm not afraid to break out into. LOL When my boys were growing up, they weren't too fond of it in public. Now, they don't care. LOL Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading so much. I have a happy dance myself that I'm not afraid to break out into. LOL When my boys were growing up, they weren't too fond of it in public. Now, they don't care. LOL Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Barb, why am I not surprised at all about your happy dance? Lol, actually my kids still roll their eyes at me, in a fun way, because they know I can laugh at myself better than they can. Anyway, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from pome lover
well, my goodness, how terrific! It's not often happy people write poems (on FS) about just being happy. I'm not belittling being happy, i just don't ofte see poems where people say they are. So ... good for you! I'm glad. and yes, I'd rather see this than the mama bear. (dancing one was strange enough) just kidding.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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well, my goodness, how terrific! It's not often happy people write poems (on FS) about just being happy. I'm not belittling being happy, i just don't ofte see poems where people say they are. So ... good for you! I'm glad. and yes, I'd rather see this than the mama bear. (dancing one was strange enough) just kidding.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Katharine, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Raul, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Perfection! I humorous well rhymed poem that both in rhyme and presentation spreads your happiness to your reader.
I only wish I could dance as well as the bear!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Perfection! I humorous well rhymed poem that both in rhyme and presentation spreads your happiness to your reader.
I only wish I could dance as well as the bear!
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Mary, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. And I also thank you for the special gift of six stars. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I have always known that silliness is good for the soul and happiness is good for the heart. Your poem has you covered. You have written a fun poem with good rhyming.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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I have always known that silliness is good for the soul and happiness is good for the heart. Your poem has you covered. You have written a fun poem with good rhyming.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Ginda, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. Love this one it certainly made me smile. I Love the dancing bear works well for your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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This is a nicely written poem. Love this one it certainly made me smile. I Love the dancing bear works well for your poem. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Joanne, I sure appreciate all of your kind words for my silly happy poem. I hope you feel better real soon too. Thank you so very much my dear friend.
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Your kindly welcome 🙂