Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Breathe"Musing of an old man
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Comment from Paul McFarland
You have done a good job in conveying the state of mind that one is in when traipsing out through Mother Nature's realm. Nice picture to go with the poem.
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You have done a good job in conveying the state of mind that one is in when traipsing out through Mother Nature's realm. Nice picture to go with the poem.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Paul, as alwys, I send thanks in abundance, Jim
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, breathing in the smell of trees and other smells of mother nature's majesty soothes souls most definitely. I love the title and the picture that displays how beautiful nature in the woods can be. This is wonderfully written and tells so well how breathing in the odor of nature can bless our souls.
Jesse
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Yes, breathing in the smell of trees and other smells of mother nature's majesty soothes souls most definitely. I love the title and the picture that displays how beautiful nature in the woods can be. This is wonderfully written and tells so well how breathing in the odor of nature can bless our souls.
Jesse
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Jesse, thank you!
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You are welcome!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good and true poem for the contest. I wish you the very best with your writing as well as your contest entry. God bless and have a good day. Patricia
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This is a very good and true poem for the contest. I wish you the very best with your writing as well as your contest entry. God bless and have a good day. Patricia
Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
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Patricia. Thanks for your thoughtfulness and blessings.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done. I don't think the ellipses are necessary. See the example for cinquain, not that they can't be, but they hang like smoke from a fire, as to my thinking, which may be valueless.
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Well done. I don't think the ellipses are necessary. See the example for cinquain, not that they can't be, but they hang like smoke from a fire, as to my thinking, which may be valueless.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Great assume that friend!
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Glad to help if and when. Tom
Comment from Rebecca Roberts1
Very nice.
The photo sets it off wonderfully. It makes you stop and take a breath.
It is peaceful and calming. Something the world needs right now.
Good luck in the contest.
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Very nice.
The photo sets it off wonderfully. It makes you stop and take a breath.
It is peaceful and calming. Something the world needs right now.
Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2023
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Rebecca, thank you for your thoughtful validation and good wishes.