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Musing of an old man
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Comment from
Janilou
Oh, poor toad indeed! You followed the writing prompt guidelines as this is twenty-five words in length. Quite the vivid mental picture!
LOL
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
Jan thanks, yes poor, poor Kermit.
Comment from
royowen
Ain't that the truth? I've noticed that road here in Australia has been responsible for the destruction of many species and undoubtedly frogs, lizards and toads as well, a wonderful rhyming 25 word entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
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Comment from
jessizero
I liked your twenty-five word poem. It was fun, and it rhymed! (Okay, the toad imploding wasn't "fun," but you know what I mean.) Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
Jessi. Yes so sad, poor, poor,Kermit 🥲🥲🥲
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