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Heart Crafted Poems - 2023

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Musing of an old man

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Comment from Janilou
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Oh, poor toad indeed! You followed the writing prompt guidelines as this is twenty-five words in length. Quite the vivid mental picture!
LOL
All the best,
Jan

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Jan thanks, yes poor, poor Kermit.
Comment from royowen
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Ain't that the truth? I've noticed that road here in Australia has been responsible for the destruction of many species and undoubtedly frogs, lizards and toads as well, a wonderful rhyming 25 word entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Thanks much!
reply by royowen on 03-Feb-2023
    Welcome
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I liked your twenty-five word poem. It was fun, and it rhymed! (Okay, the toad imploding wasn't "fun," but you know what I mean.) Thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

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 Comment Written 03-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
    Jessi. Yes so sad, poor, poor,Kermit 🥲🥲🥲