Pantygynt's Passion
Rhyming verse50 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good and well written poem about Jim. You used very good descriptive words and told about his teaching very well too. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is a very good and well written poem about Jim. You used very good descriptive words and told about his teaching very well too. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello sweet Teri. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :)
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned just like your teacher! I would love to join in, but again there's too much prose in my head and my health has been a challenge. My doctor has been working with me to get my thyroid levels up from zero. My condition has affected my thoughts, mood, metabolism and energy. Some days it's difficult to get out of bed. Anyway, thank you so much for the invitation. I'm sure the class will be a huge success.
Sending you my best today as always, sweet Melissa,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Beautifully penned just like your teacher! I would love to join in, but again there's too much prose in my head and my health has been a challenge. My doctor has been working with me to get my thyroid levels up from zero. My condition has affected my thoughts, mood, metabolism and energy. Some days it's difficult to get out of bed. Anyway, thank you so much for the invitation. I'm sure the class will be a huge success.
Sending you my best today as always, sweet Melissa,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello sweet Sal. Thank you so much. I have gotten a lot out of the classes and hope others might be interested too... I just wanted to get the word out that there is an opportunity with a first class teacher. :) I hope your condition improves and that you have more energy!!! Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You have obviously taken his class since you wrote this poem oh so well.
I love the meter and the rhymes. I love the picture it adds much to the piece.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
I hope you get a place in his classroom.
Jesse
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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You have obviously taken his class since you wrote this poem oh so well.
I love the meter and the rhymes. I love the picture it adds much to the piece.
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
I hope you get a place in his classroom.
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, Jesse. I really appreciate your comments!
Melissa
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You are welcome, Melissa.
Jesse
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this poem to promote Jim's classes, what a lot of fun and I must admit your poetry has gone from strength to strength, lovely clever rhymes with a warm sentiment, Jim will love this one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I love this poem to promote Jim's classes, what a lot of fun and I must admit your poetry has gone from strength to strength, lovely clever rhymes with a warm sentiment, Jim will love this one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, Dolly. I really appreciate your comments and your wonderful encouraging words. Jim did like it :). He said he blushed. LOL
Melissa
Comment from JLR
This six stars is both for the poet and the teacher whose calm demeanor and quick wit is always experienced in every class. The result of his Love of meter and rhyme taught is in full display with one of his most competent students on display here for all to enjoy.
So lover of words ... take the plunge into Pantygnt's Zoom room and it will be meter and rhyme you too will learn.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This six stars is both for the poet and the teacher whose calm demeanor and quick wit is always experienced in every class. The result of his Love of meter and rhyme taught is in full display with one of his most competent students on display here for all to enjoy.
So lover of words ... take the plunge into Pantygnt's Zoom room and it will be meter and rhyme you too will learn.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, dear Jim. I really appreciate your comments and your wonderful words of encouragement. Hugs!
Melissa
Comment from Ricky1024
This was well-written and praises one of our fanstory from compatriots.
Even though I can't remember the last time I reviewed the person to work I do know of him.
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This was very well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This was well-written and praises one of our fanstory from compatriots.
Even though I can't remember the last time I reviewed the person to work I do know of him.
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This was very well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much, Ricky. I really appreciate your comments!
Melissa
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Clever poetry, my dear. Have no ear, it rhymed in time just as the master suggested. Well done, save on the last line I believe the spelling is wrong for savoir-faire where you have 'ior' instead. Tom
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Clever poetry, my dear. Have no ear, it rhymed in time just as the master suggested. Well done, save on the last line I believe the spelling is wrong for savoir-faire where you have 'ior' instead. Tom
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Hello dear Tom. Yes, I believe I have misspelled it and will run as fast as I can to edit that pesky word. LOL. Thank you so much.
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
You could teach the class, yourself, Melissa; I've ALWAYS admired your talents with meter and rhyme. But this one is especially fun since it's a tribute/advertisement for someone we know and look up to here on the site. So, nice work here in many, many areas!! Thanks for letting us know. I'm actually giving it some thought.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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You could teach the class, yourself, Melissa; I've ALWAYS admired your talents with meter and rhyme. But this one is especially fun since it's a tribute/advertisement for someone we know and look up to here on the site. So, nice work here in many, many areas!! Thanks for letting us know. I'm actually giving it some thought.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Oh, dearest Rachelle, you are such a wonderful writer yourself. I hope you consider the class. Even though I have taken it before, I plan to sign up again and we could share our creative endeavors together. Such fun. Hugs and thank you!
Melissa
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Oooh! I'd like that a lot. Okay. I'll do it. Thanks for the nudge! xo
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Comment from Pantygynt
This picture is surprisingly like my house here in wales. This poem I very much appreciate. Thank you so much for this effort on my behalf. My internet is a bit shaky this morning but I have been able to promote it to the No1 spot.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This picture is surprisingly like my house here in wales. This poem I very much appreciate. Thank you so much for this effort on my behalf. My internet is a bit shaky this morning but I have been able to promote it to the No1 spot.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Oh thank you, Jim. I hope you don't mind that I wrote about you without asking permission. :). I DO love your classes and wanted to help get you and your work out there. Thanks for promoting it ~ and thanks for being you! Hugs!
Melissa
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I don't mind at all. In fact thanks again for writing it and making me blush. Are you going to join Lisa in this class? Not that you need it.
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Yes, I am waiting for PayPal to accept my funds that I transferred yesterday. It takes. 3-5 days... I just chatted with Rachelle Allen and she said she is going to sign up too.
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That's great news. Thanks for your efforts. We should get one from the scholarship so it will all be worthwhile.
Comment from royowen
Seeing I'm not a newbie I don't think I'll qualify Melissa. But this is beautifully written, the flow is perfect, the narrative is "classy" and the accurate rhyme is to die for, and all the newbies will be impressed, including me, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Seeing I'm not a newbie I don't think I'll qualify Melissa. But this is beautifully written, the flow is perfect, the narrative is "classy" and the accurate rhyme is to die for, and all the newbies will be impressed, including me, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Oh Roy, you are a dear!!! Thank you for you lovely words and review of this verse. I love to take the classes and wanted to get the word out to everyone! Hugs, my friend.
Melissa
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Good job
